老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“help me out when I are in a bad emotion”应改为“helps me when I am feeling down”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余表达。

範例: My favourite teacher is my English teacher, Matty. He is very kind and always helps me when I feel upset. Moreover, he has helped me improve my academic performance significantly.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“contact with”应为“contact”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的搭配，并且表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. He is not only a teacher but also a good friend who gives me valuable advice. We often share our experiences and keep in contact regularly.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“help you”应为“help me”，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和人称，避免直译，表达更地道。

範例: My favourite teacher helped me in many ways. For example, when I felt sad, he encouraged me with motivating words, which boosted my confidence and made me happy.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不准确，如“the teacher not only helps students with their own emotion”应改为“teachers not only help students with their emotions”。建议注意冠词使用和句子结构，表达更清晰。

範例: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because teachers not only help students with their emotions but also need strong communication skills, which I find challenging.

× He is very kind and help me out when I are in a bad emotion.

✓ He is very kind and helps me out when I am in a bad emotion.

主谓一致错误。主语是第三人称单数He，谓语动词help应加-s变为helps。I是第一人称单数，谓语动词be动词应为am。

× when I are in a bad emotion.

✓ when I am in a bad mood.

emotion是名词，表达情绪时常用短语a bad mood，且are用错，应为am。

× it's also good people.

✓ he is also a good person.

it指代错误，指人应使用he，people是复数，单数应为person，且缺少冠词a。

× I usually contact with my primary school teacher

✓ I usually contact my primary school teacher

动词contact后不需要介词with，直接跟宾语。

× because the good, the good teacher is not just a teacher, it's also good friend in my life.

✓ because a good teacher is not just a teacher, he's also a good friend in my life.

重复the good且缺少冠词a，good friend前缺少冠词a，且it指代错误，应为he。

× He can give me some fantastic advice and it's been my friend.

✓ He can give me some fantastic advice and has been my friend.

it指代错误，指人应使用he，且时态应为现在完成时has been。

× We can touch connect with each other's different things.

✓ We can connect and share different things with each other.

touch connect用法错误，且each other's用法不当，应为each other。

× There are different kinds of way my favorite teacher help you

✓ There are different kinds of ways my favorite teacher helps you

way应为复数ways，help应加-s与主语teacher一致。

× my favorite teacher help you

✓ my favorite teacher helps you

主语是第三人称单数teacher，谓语动词help应加-s。

× he helped me while I was blue

✓ he helped me while I was feeling blue

表达“感到沮丧”时，blue前应加动词短语feeling。

× he also recharged my battery by his motivated words

✓ he also recharged my battery with his motivating words

motivated是过去分词，形容词应为motivating，表示激励人的。

× I don't want to be a teacher when I grow up because the teacher not only helps students with their own emotion, also must have a ability to communicate with students and other people.

✓ I don't want to be a teacher when I grow up because a teacher not only helps students with their own emotions, but also must have the ability to communicate with students and other people.

冠词the用错，应为a teacher；emotion应为复数emotions；缺少连词but also；a ability应为an ability。

× also must have a ability to communicate with students and other people.

✓ also must have the ability to communicate with students and other people.

ability前应使用定冠词the而非不定冠词a。

× So that's the challenging.

✓ So that's challenging.

challenging是形容词，前面不需要定冠词the。