镜子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details logically.

範例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror every day. I usually comb my hair and check my appearance before going out. This helps me feel confident about how I look.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage. Use linking words to explain your answer clearly and provide specific details about the mirrors.

範例: No, I have never bought mirrors because all the mirrors in my house were bought by my mother. They have unique shapes and look very beautiful, which enhances the beauty of our home.

建議: Make your answer more natural and complete. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

範例: No, I usually don't carry a mirror with me because I find it unnecessary and inconvenient to keep one while going out.

建議: Avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about the mirrors and their effect on your room's decoration.

範例: Yes, I use mirrors to decorate my room. There are two uniquely shaped mirrors in my room, which were bought by my mother. They enhance the beauty of my room significantly.

× I comb my hairs in front of mirror

✓ I comb my hair in front of the mirror

The word 'hair' is generally uncountable when referring to all the hair on one's head, so 'hairs' is incorrect here. Also, 'mirror' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific mirror.

× I comb my hairs in front of mirror

✓ I comb my hair in front of the mirror

The definite article 'the' is required before 'mirror' because it refers to a specific mirror known to both speaker and listener.

× I wear I wear dresses that time I also see myself in. Mirror how I looks like.

✓ I wear dresses; at that time, I also see myself in the mirror to know how I look.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'mirror' as it refers to a specific mirror. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× how I looks like

✓ how I look

The verb 'look' should be in base form after 'how I' because 'I' is the subject and 'look' agrees with 'I' in present tense.

× No, I never bought the mirrors will cause the mirrors which are in my house that all mirrors are vote by my mother

✓ No, I never bought any mirrors because the mirrors in my house were all bought by my mother

'Mirrors' is plural, so 'any mirrors' is appropriate. 'Will cause' is incorrect here; 'because' is the correct conjunction. 'Vote' is a wrong word; 'bought' is correct past tense of 'buy'.

× all mirrors are vote by my mother

✓ all mirrors were bought by my mother

The past tense passive form is 'were bought' not 'are vote'. 'Vote' is incorrect here.

× which looks very beautiful and enhance the beauty of false

✓ which look very beautiful and enhance the beauty of the house

'Looks' should be 'look' to agree with plural 'mirrors'. 'False' is incorrect; likely meant 'house'. Also, 'enhance' agrees with plural subject 'mirrors'.

× No, I don't take a mirror with myself 'cause I don't like to keep a mirrors with me

✓ No, I don't take a mirror with me because I don't like to keep mirrors with me

'With myself' is incorrect; 'with me' is correct. Also, 'a mirrors' is incorrect; 'mirrors' is plural and should not have 'a'.

× I don't like to keep a mirrors with me

✓ I don't like to keep mirrors with me

'Mirrors' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed.

× I don't. Have a.

✓ I don't have one.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Have a' should be 'have one' to complete the thought.

× Yes, of course I use mirror to decorate decorate my room

✓ Yes, of course I use mirrors to decorate my room

'Mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' because generally multiple mirrors are used for decoration. Also, 'decorate' is repeated unnecessarily.

× There are two mirrors in in my room which are a very unique in shape

✓ There are two mirrors in my room which are very unique in shape

'A very unique' is incorrect because 'unique' is an absolute adjective and does not take 'a'. Also, 'in in' is a repetition error.

× which enhance the beauty of my house that mirrors our voter by my mother

✓ which enhance the beauty of my house; those mirrors were bought by my mother

'Our voter' is incorrect; likely meant 'were bought'. Also, 'that' should be 'those' to refer to plural mirrors.