镜子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrases like "check my atmosphere." Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror because it helps me check if I look healthy. For example, I often examine my face and body to see if I need to take better care of myself. I usually do this every morning before leaving the house.

建議: Your answer contains errors and irrelevant words like "meals" and "swam," which confuse the meaning. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and grammar. Also, provide more specific details about the mirror you bought and why it was memorable.

範例: Yes, I have bought several mirrors before. The most memorable one was a large mirror I purchased during the COVID-19 pandemic because I spent a lot of time at home and wanted to make my room look brighter and more spacious.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more natural phrases and linking words. For example, instead of "condition of face and body," say "my appearance." Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and keep the answer concise.

範例: No, I don't usually carry a mirror with me because I prefer to travel light, especially during my commute. Instead, I use my smartphone's front camera to quickly check my appearance when needed.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing like "my preference is much more simple one" and "my room of student accommodation." Try to use more natural expressions and link your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room because I prefer a simpler style. However, when I moved to London, I was surprised to find that my student accommodation had three or four mirrors that made the room feel brighter.

× I usually use my mirror to check my atmosphere by looking at body and face carefully.

✓ I usually use my mirror to check my appearance by looking at my body and face carefully.

The word 'atmosphere' is incorrectly used here; the correct term is 'appearance' when referring to how one looks. Also, 'body' and 'face' need possessive pronouns 'my' to specify ownership.

× Yes, I have bought several meals before and swam.

✓ Yes, I have bought several mirrors before and swam.

The word 'meals' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'mirrors'. The sentence should use 'mirrors' to make sense in context.

× The most memorable items was a mirror that I bought during the COVID-19 pandemic.

✓ The most memorable item was a mirror that I bought during the COVID-19 pandemic.

The subject 'items' is plural but the verb 'was' is singular. Since the sentence refers to a single mirror, 'item' should be singular to agree with 'was'.

× At that time, I spent a lot of time at my home and I wanted to make my home much brighter.

✓ At that time, I spent a lot of time at home and I wanted to make my home much brighter.

The phrase 'at my home' is less natural; 'at home' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× No, I don't usually carry my mirror in my daily life because I don't want to have too many things, for example, when I commute to my workplace.

✓ No, I don't usually carry a mirror in my daily life because I don't want to have too many things, for example, when I commute to my workplace.

Using 'my mirror' implies a specific mirror, but generally people carry 'a mirror' when referring to any mirror. Also, 'in my daily life' is acceptable but 'during my daily life' or 'in daily life' could be alternatives.

× Therefore, I usually use my smartphone as a mirror to check my condition of face and body.

✓ Therefore, I usually use my smartphone as a mirror to check the condition of my face and body.

The phrase 'my condition of face and body' is incorrect. It should be 'the condition of my face and body' to correctly use possessive and article.

× No, I wouldn't like to use mirrors to decorate my room, because my preference is much more simple one.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to use mirrors to decorate my room, because my preference is for a much simpler style.

The phrase 'much more simple one' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'a much simpler style' or 'a simpler one' to correctly express preference.

× However, after coming to London, I was very astonished to notice that my room of student accommodation is illuminated by three or four mirrors.

✓ However, after coming to London, I was very astonished to notice that my student accommodation room is illuminated by three or four mirrors.

The phrase 'my room of student accommodation' is incorrect. The correct form is 'my student accommodation room' or 'my room in student accommodation'.