镜子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 発音ミスや語彙の誤用（例: "lick" は誤り）を直し、文を簡潔にして自然に答える練習をしてください。トピック文で直接答え、その後に頻度や理由を短く付け加えます。接続詞（because, so, but）を適切に使い、語順と複数形・冠詞に注意しましょう。

範例: I'm not a big fan of looking at myself in the mirror. I do check the mirror every morning to make sure my outfit and hair look fine before I go out.

建議: 過去時制と冠詞を正しく使い、冗長な表現を減らしてください。理由は一度述べ、例を一つ加えると良いです。また、文をつなぐときは適切な接続詞（because → so / as）や過去形（need → needed）を使いましょう。

範例: Yes, I have. When I was a student I bought several small mirrors because I needed to check my clothes and makeup; I was very particular about my appearance then.

建議: 口語の間投詞（umm, uh）を減らし、冠詞を正しく使って文を流暢にしましょう。現在の習慣と過去の比較を示す構造は良いので、接続詞（but, however）を使って明確に対比してください。

範例: I don't usually carry a mirror because I can check my appearance with my smartphone. However, when I was a student, I often carried a small hand mirror.

建議: 最初の表現をもっと自然にして、現在の習慣をはっきり述べてください。不要な句（in that kind of way）や間投詞を減らし、場所の説明を簡潔に述べましょう。

範例: Not really. I don't use mirrors as decoration; I mainly have them in the bathroom and wardrobe so I can check my outfit easily.

× Actually I'm not big fan of looking at myself in the mirror, but I lick myself in the mirror every morning because I need to check my outfit and faces or anything like that to go out and more comfortably.

✓ Actually, I'm not a big fan of looking at myself in the mirror, but I look at myself in the mirror every morning because I need to check my outfit and my face or anything like that before going out so I can be more comfortable.

記事（a/an/the）の欠如とスペルミスにより意味が不明瞭になっています。'not a big fan'のように可算名詞の前に不定冠詞aが必要です。また'lick'はスペルミスで'look'が正しいです。'faces'は単数の'face'が自然で、'before going out'のように目的を明確にする接続表現に直すと良いです。改善の提案: 文ごとに一つの主題を保ち、冠詞の使用と単複数を確認し、スペルチェックを行ってください.

× Yes I have. When I was a student I bought several mirrors because I need to check my outfit and face when I addressed it because I was very careful about my outfit at that time.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was a student I bought several mirrors because I needed to check my outfit and my face when I went out because I was very careful about my appearance at that time.

時制が不一致です。過去の状況を説明しているので主節も過去形（needed, went out）に揃える必要があります。'addressed it'は不自然でおそらく'went out'または'left'が正しいです。自然な語彙として'appearance'を使うと良いです。改善の提案: 文の時制を揃え、適切な動詞フレーズ（go outなど）を使ってください.

× Well, honestly, I don't carry mirror with me because umm, I can check my outfit and myself by using my smartphone. Uh, but when I was a student I usually carried a mirror with me.

✓ Well, honestly, I don't carry a mirror with me because I can check my outfit and myself by using my smartphone. But when I was a student I usually carried a mirror with me.

可算名詞'mirror'の前には不定冠詞'a'が必要です。また'umm'や'uh'は会話では許容されますが文書では削除できます。改善の提案: 可算名詞の前に冠詞を入れる習慣をつけ、不要な間投詞は省いてください.

× While I didn't use mirrors in that kind of way, umm, I usually use mirrors in my bathroom or in my closet because I can check my outfit very comfortably.

✓ While I didn't use mirrors in that kind of way, I usually use mirrors in my bathroom or in my closet because I can check my outfit comfortably.

時制の整合性を確認してください。対比表現'While I didn't use...'（過去）とその後の現在形'use'は文脈上混乱を招きますが、話し手が現在習慣を述べているなら過去節を'While I don't use...'に変えるか、ここでは'While I didn't use...'を維持するなら'used to use'のように過去習慣を示すべきです。提案としては現在の習慣を述べるなら過去形を現在形に直すか、過去の習慣を述べるなら両方過去形に揃えてください. Use 'comfortably' rather than 'very comfortably' for naturalness.