梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều từ không chính xác và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, có liên kết logic.

範例: Yes, I can usually remember my dreams. Often, they involve traveling to new places or meeting interesting people, which makes them enjoyable to recall.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi từ vựng, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I often share my dreams with my parents, especially when I dream about meeting new or famous people. I also like to hear about their dreams.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác. Nên giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings. For example, if I dream about someone I think about a lot, it might show my feelings or thoughts about that person.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về ước mơ và cách bạn muốn thực hiện chúng.

範例: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true. For instance, I hope to travel to new countries and meet famous people someday.

× Usually some of the greens I have.

✓ Usually some of the dreams I have.

The word 'greens' is incorrect in this context; the correct plural noun is 'dreams' to match the topic. This is a singular/plural issue where the wrong plural form is used.

× Especially they're happy for them.

✓ Especially, I feel happy about them.

The sentence uses 'they're' and 'them' incorrectly. The pronouns do not clearly refer to the subject. It should be rephrased to express the speaker's feelings about the dreams.

× I have fun recording dreams that traveli some new destinations or admitted their people.

✓ I have fun recalling dreams that travel to some new destinations or involve different people.

The word 'traveli' is incorrect; it should be 'travel'. 'Admitted their people' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'involve different people' is a better phrase. This is an adjective/adverb and word choice issue.

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✓ Oh yes, I usually share some dreams with my family, especially my parents, as I usually share dreams when I meet new people, especially famous people or when I see new faces.

The sentence contains many incorrect words and pronouns such as 'rims', 'artist misery', 'sell rims', and 'new people'. These are likely misheard or misused words. Correct pronouns and vocabulary are needed to make the sentence meaningful.

× Oh yes, I fingerings hard, virtually meaningless because too honest.

✓ Oh yes, I find them hard to understand, virtually meaningless because they are too honest.

'Fingerings' is incorrect; it should be 'find them'. The sentence structure and word choice are incorrect, needing correction to express the intended meaning.

× I think when I think about something or people very much as so relaxed about dreams, I think dreams I can have new people, people I want.

✓ I think when I think about something or people very much, I feel relaxed about dreams. I think dreams can bring new people, people I want.

The sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. Correct pronouns and clearer sentence structure improve understanding.

× Oh yes, I'm rims I want to make a two true of Assember sometimes when I meet new people, eventually famous people or I want to travel some places I want so I want to make my rims 22.

✓ Oh yes, I have dreams I want to make come true. Sometimes when I meet new people, especially famous people, or when I want to travel to some places, I want to make my dreams come true.

The sentence contains many incorrect words such as 'rims', 'two true of Assember', and 'rims 22'. These are likely misheard or misspelled words. Correct pronouns and vocabulary are necessary for clarity.