梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

範例: Yes, I can often remember my dreams, especially those I had when I was a little girl. However, sometimes I have many dreams at night, so I don't recall all of them clearly.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng sai và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến của mình.

範例: I usually don't share my dreams with others because I think it's unnecessary. Also, I'm not very interested in other people's dreams since I focus on my own.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, và giải thích ý kiến của mình một cách cụ thể hơn với từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings. They can influence our decisions and help us understand our feelings better.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do tại sao bạn muốn thực hiện ước mơ.

範例: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they play an important role in my life and help me decide my future.

× Hiding often remember the dreams I had because I'm.

✓ I often remember the dreams I had because I am.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing subjects, making it unclear. The corrected sentence places the subject 'I' before the verb 'often remember' and completes the sentence properly. Suggestion: Always ensure subject-verb-object order in English sentences.

× Their dreams I had when I just were still a little girl an.

✓ The dreams I had when I was still a little girl.

'Their' is incorrect here; it should be 'The'. Also, 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. Suggestion: Use 'was' with singular first person past tense and 'the' for definite articles.

× I have a lot of trims an to stay in work work dreams so I don't remember much.

✓ I have a lot of dreams and stay in work dreams, so I don't remember much.

'Trims' is a misspelling of 'dreams'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. The phrase 'stay in work work dreams' is unclear but corrected to 'stay in work dreams'. Suggestion: Check spelling and conjunction usage carefully.

× I definitely don't want to see how my dreams with orders because I think.

✓ I definitely don't want to share my dreams with others because I think.

'See how my dreams with orders' is incorrect; it should be 'share my dreams with others'. The modal verb 'want to' is correctly used but the verb following it was wrong. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs after modal verbs.

× Is is unneccessary Ann?

✓ It is unnecessary, and

The sentence is incomplete and contains spelling errors. 'Is is' should be 'It is', 'unneccessary' should be 'unnecessary', and 'Ann' is likely 'and'. Suggestion: Ensure sentences are complete and spelled correctly.

× And I think I don't really interested in order streams because they have no idea out rooms and I have my own dreams so I don't care about what.

✓ And I think I am not really interested in other people's dreams because they have no idea about my dreams, and I have my own dreams so I don't care about theirs.

Incorrect pronouns 'order streams' should be 'other people's dreams', 'out rooms' should be 'about my dreams', and 'what' is vague. Also, 'I don't really interested' should be 'I am not really interested'. Suggestion: Use correct pronouns and verb forms.

× Yes, I think dreams have 100 residents, special meanings to me.

✓ Yes, I think dreams have 100 reasons, special meanings to me.

'Residents' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'reasons'. Suggestion: Use vocabulary appropriate to context.

× Dreams have a lot of minutes in there an dreams Easter big role to decissions of our our future an is the key to connect it now.

✓ Dreams have a lot of meanings, and they play a big role in decisions about our future and are the key to connecting it now.

The original sentence has many spelling errors and incorrect structure. 'Minutes' should be 'meanings', 'Easter' should be 'play', 'decissions' should be 'decisions', 'our our' is repeated, and 'an is' should be 'and are'. Suggestion: Check spelling and sentence structure carefully.

× Yes, of course. That's what everyone an ME want it.

✓ Yes, of course. That's what everyone and I want.

'An ME' should be 'and I', and 'want it' should be 'want'. Suggestion: Use correct pronouns and avoid unnecessary objects.

× Because dreams to make dreams, I saw a play on importing important role in my heart and and the divisions are my future.

✓ Because dreams play an important role in my heart, and the decisions are about my future.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors: 'dreams to make dreams' is unclear, 'I saw a play on importing important role' is incorrect, 'and and the divisions' should be 'and the decisions'. Suggestion: Use clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary.

× Well, better.

✓ Well, it will be better.

The phrase 'Well, better.' is incomplete. Adding 'it will be' completes the sentence. Suggestion: Ensure sentences are complete with subject and verb.