梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "dreams I had" repeated multiple times. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't often remember my dreams, but sometimes I recall them, especially if they were nightmares or particularly beautiful.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use more natural phrasing and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar words like "dreams" too often.

範例: I'm quite introverted, so I usually don't share my dreams with others. However, I enjoy listening to other people's dreams when they choose to share them.

建議: Try to avoid filler words like "uh" and make your explanation more specific and fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

範例: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings. For instance, dreaming about work might indicate that you're forgetting something important or that it's time for a change.

建議: Your answer is good but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like "make my dreams come true" and check for grammatical errors such as "a successful and healthy lives."

範例: Yes, like many people, I want to achieve my dreams. I often imagine being wealthy and living a successful, healthy life, and I hope to realize these goals in the future.

× No, I don't quite often remember the dreams I had, but sometimes I might remember the dreams that I had the previous night.

✓ No, I don't often remember the dreams I have, but sometimes I might remember the dreams that I had the previous night.

The phrase 'don't quite often' is incorrect; 'don't often' is the proper adverb placement for frequency. Also, since the question is about dreams in general, present tense 'have' is more appropriate than past tense 'had' for recurring events.

× No, I am a very introvert person so I do not like to share my dreams with others.

✓ No, I am a very introverted person so I do not like to share my dreams with others.

The word 'introvert' is a noun; the adjective form 'introverted' should be used to describe a person.

× But definitely I would like to hear about the dreams that other people have if they want to share it with me.

✓ But definitely I would like to hear about the dreams that other people have if they want to share them with me.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'dreams' which is plural; therefore, 'them' should be used.

× I often dream about being rich and living a successful and healthy lives, so I would definitely like to see my dreams come true in the future.

✓ I often dream about being rich and living a successful and healthy life, so I would definitely like to see my dreams come true in the future.

The word 'lives' is plural but should be singular 'life' to agree with the singular subject 'I' and the context of one person's life.