梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'sometimes' and 'other times'.

範例: Yes, I can remember my dreams occasionally, especially when they are vivid or unusual. However, I often forget them quickly after waking up because my memory fades fast in the morning.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes. Also, avoid repeating words like 'also' and 'others' unnecessarily.

範例: Definitely, I usually share my dreams with my friends and family. Moreover, I am interested in other people's dreams because some of them are very funny and interesting.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct sentence structure and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to clarify your points.

範例: In my opinion, dreams do not have special meanings. However, sometimes people dream about things they have been thinking about before going to sleep, which might appear again the next day.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical mistakes. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and organize your ideas logically with linking words. Be specific and concise when describing your dreams.

範例: Of course, I want to make my dreams come true because I want to be successful in the future. I have many plans, including becoming an entrepreneur and opening my own business selling clothes, shoes, and utensils.

× Definitely, I usually share my dreams with my friends and my family also and I also interested in other others dreams because some dreams are very funny and interesting as well.

✓ Definitely, I usually share my dreams with my friends and my family, and I am also interested in others' dreams because some dreams are very funny and interesting as well.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'and' twice without proper structure and misses the verb 'am' before 'interested'. Also, 'other others dreams' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'others' dreams' to show possession. The conjunction 'and' should connect two independent clauses properly, and the verb 'am' is necessary for the present tense of 'to be' with 'I'.

× According to me dreams have no any special meanings, but I know that dream which people think before a night, so that thing in the next day night.

✓ According to me, dreams have no special meanings, but I know that the dream which people think about before night can happen the next day or night.

The phrase 'no any' is incorrect; 'no' or 'any' should be used alone. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and missing prepositions like 'about'. The phrase 'before a night' is unnatural; 'before night' or 'the night before' is better. The sentence needs clearer structure to express the idea that dreams may relate to thoughts before sleeping and events the next day or night.

× Of course, I want to make my dreams come true because I want to success in my future.

✓ Of course, I want to make my dreams come true because I want to succeed in my future.

The word 'success' is a noun, but the sentence requires a verb to express the action. The correct verb form is 'succeed'. This is a verb form issue rather than singular/plural, but since 'success' is misused, it is corrected to 'succeed' to fit the sentence.

× Apart from that, uh, there are lot of plans in my mind which I want to complete in my future.

✓ Apart from that, uh, there are a lot of plans in my mind which I want to complete in my future.

The phrase 'there are lot of plans' is missing the article 'a' before 'lot'. The correct phrase is 'a lot of plans'. This is an article error related to quantifiers.

× My dream is that I want to become entrepreneur.

✓ My dream is that I want to become an entrepreneur.

The noun 'entrepreneur' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'an' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect in English grammar.

× I want to become my own.

✓ I want to be my own boss.

The sentence 'I want to become my own' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks an object or complement to complete the meaning. Adding 'boss' clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Uh, I want to open my own business as attire, shoes and utensils.

✓ Uh, I want to open my own business selling attire, shoes, and utensils.

The preposition 'as' is incorrectly used here. To express the types of products sold, 'selling' is appropriate. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list.