梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi net ve anlamlı bir şekilde tamamlamalısınız. Örneğin, rüyalarınızı ne sıklıkla hatırladığınız ve neden hatırladığınız hakkında daha açık ve tutarlı bilgi vermelisiniz.

範例: Yes, I often remember my dreams, especially when they are surprising or unusual. These dreams tend to stay in my mind because they evoke strong emotions.

建議: Cevabınızda cümlelerinizi tamamlamalı ve daha tutarlı bir yapı kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, neden rüyalarınızı paylaşmadığınızı ve başkalarının rüyalarına neden ilgi duymadığınızı daha açık ve detaylı açıklamalısınız.

範例: I rarely share my dreams with others because I consider them personal. Also, I prefer to understand their meaning myself before discussing them. Moreover, I am not very interested in other people's dreams as I find them less relevant to me.

建議: Cevabınızda düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade etmelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi tamamlamalı ve örneklerle desteklemelisiniz. Şu anki cevap karışık ve anlaşılması zor.

範例: Yes, I think dreams have special meanings because they reveal our subconscious thoughts and feelings. For example, if I dream about someone named James, it might indicate my feelings or concerns about that person.

建議: Cevabınız oldukça iyi ve net. Ancak, daha fazla bağlaç kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayabilir ve ifadelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, of course, I want to make my dreams come true because achieving my goals gives me a sense of fulfillment and happiness. For instance, I hope to work for a multimedia company one day, and I am actively working towards this realistic plan.

× Yes, I can often remember the dreams I have when I surprised me.

✓ Yes, I can often remember the dreams I have when they surprise me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'surprised' instead of the present tense 'surprise' to match the present tense context of 'I have'. The verb should agree in tense with the time frame being described.

× I I can remember but is.

✓ I can remember them, but sometimes I can't.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. It appears to be fragmented and missing necessary components to form a complete sentence. The correction provides a clear and complete sentence that conveys the intended meaning.

× However, I am not interested in hearing about other people's dreams because.

✓ However, I am not interested in hearing about other people's dreams.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the reason, resulting in an incomplete sentence. Removing 'because' completes the sentence properly.

× Yes, I believe dreams often have special meanings because they reflect our subconscious, tactful and feeling when I saw James and I believe can happen, you know?

✓ Yes, I believe dreams often have special meanings because they reflect our subconscious thoughts and feelings.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unrelated or unclear phrases such as 'tactful and feeling when I saw James and I believe can happen, you know?'. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly.