梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to give a direct response with clear ideas and avoid filler words. Use simple, coherent sentences and provide specific details about your dreams.

範例: Yes, I can remember my dreams clearly. For example, I often dream about my daughter, which motivates me to be strong and work hard.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using correct grammar and linking words to make it more coherent. Also, try to expand your answer with reasons or examples.

範例: I think dreams are very private, so I only share them with close family members like my mother, siblings, and close friends. Sometimes, I also like to hear about their dreams because it helps me understand them better.

建議: Your answer shows understanding but is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and provide specific examples to explain your opinion.

範例: Definitely, I believe every dream has a special meaning. For instance, some dreams relate to childhood memories, while others might reflect family issues or even past traumas.

建議: Your answer is positive but could be more fluent and structured. Avoid excessive fillers and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

範例: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they are very important to me. When I work towards them, I feel happy and more confident.

× From my point of view dreams is very very private but with my close persons like my mother, close friend or sibling and also my cousins sometimes share my dreams.

✓ From my point of view, dreams are very very private but I sometimes share my dreams with my close persons like my mother, close friend, sibling, and also my cousins.

The subject 'dreams' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, the sentence structure was unclear; adding 'I sometimes share my dreams with' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Uh definitely yes, every dream uh, have umm, it's uh, special meaning umm, some of them is related umm, in childhood, uh umm, some families related uh, future, umm, probably uh, picked traumas and others.

✓ Uh definitely yes, every dream has its special meaning. Some of them are related to childhood, some families are related to the future, probably past traumas and others.

The subject 'every dream' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'some of them' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Correct verb agreement is necessary for clarity.