梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, which affects the naturalness and effectiveness. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I can remember my childhood dreams clearly. When I was young, I wanted to become a doctor because I believed helping people and saving lives was very important and rewarding.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why you find discussing dreams interesting.

範例: Yes, when I was a child, I often shared my dreams with my mom and friends. Moreover, I was interested in their dreams because discussing them was both fun and insightful.

建議: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your opinion with specific reasons, using linking words for coherence.

範例: Absolutely, I believe dreams have special meanings because they reflect our personal experiences and emotions. Therefore, understanding others' dreams can reveal their aspirations and feelings.

建議: Your answer is short and contains unclear phrasing. Try to give a direct response followed by a reason or example to support your opinion.

範例: Absolutely, I want to make my dreams come true because they give my life purpose and motivation. Without pursuing them, life would feel meaningless.

× I want to become a daughter because I think helping people.

✓ I want to become a doctor because I think helping people is important.

The word 'daughter' is incorrect in this context; likely, the student meant 'doctor'. Also, the phrase 'helping people' needs to be connected properly to the sentence. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the singular noun usage.

× Save a life is very. Very. It's a very.

✓ Saving a life is very important.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Save a life is very' is incorrect; it should be 'Saving a life is very important' to form a complete and meaningful sentence.

× I would share my dream to my mom and friends, and I also interested my friend's dream because it is a nice topic to discuss and it is funny and interesting.

✓ I would share my dream with my mom and friends, and I am also interested in my friends' dreams because they are nice topics to discuss and are funny and interesting.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'share'; it should be 'share with'. Also, 'interested' requires the preposition 'in'. The possessive form 'friend's dream' should be plural 'friends' dreams' to match the plural subject. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition use and agreement.

× everyone have different dreams and the cause of that.

✓ everyone has different dreams and the causes of those dreams are different too.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has'. Also, 'cause' should be plural 'causes' to agree with 'dreams'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and pluralization.

× It's different too, so it is. So it is interesting to know about others aspiration.

✓ They are different too, so it is interesting to know about others' aspirations.

The pronoun 'It' is unclear; 'They' refers to 'dreams' and 'causes'. Also, 'others aspiration' should be 'others' aspirations' to show possession and plural form. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Dream is meaningful to everyone, so if you don't want to let it become true, why you?

✓ Dreams are meaningful to everyone, so if you don't want to let them come true, why not?

The singular 'Dream' should be plural 'Dreams' to generalize. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'dreams'. The phrase 'why you?' is incomplete and corrected to 'why not?' for proper expression.