电子邮件— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子结构需要更自然和准确。回答应先给出主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持，注意动词时态和单复数一致，避免重复。可用连接词使表达更连贯，如“for example”“because”。

範例: Yes, I send emails regularly. For example, I often reply to clients and update my project partner on progress, because we need to coordinate tasks and report to our manager.

建議: 回答要更简洁，先给出明确频率或场景，然后用具体原因支持。注意词序和固定搭配（keep someone updated / update each other），避免冗长重复。

範例: I usually send emails to my partner every day to keep each other updated on the project, and to prepare material for our manager's reports.

建議: 表述需更准确和自然。用更合适的词汇（e.g. instant messaging, face-to-face）并解释原因，注意语法（tend to + verb）和词形（communicate）。

範例: I don't think email is very popular in China; people usually prefer instant messaging or face-to-face communication because those methods are faster and more convenient.

建議: 观点表达要清楚并给出具体理由。注意时态和表达（e-mail is a more formal version of a letter; nowadays people prefer convenience），避免语法错误和模糊词语。可以预测并举例说明什么时候会继续被使用。

範例: I think email will remain important because it is the more formal way to communicate for business or official matters, even though people often choose instant messages for casual chats.

× I often send e-mail. For example I need to reply the clients and also updated the project to my partner.

✓ I often send e-mails. For example, I need to reply to clients and also update the project with my partner.

句中有动词形式错误：原句中使用了“updated”（过去式）和缺少不定式或动名词的正确形式。此处表达的是习惯性或一般现在的动作，应该用动词原形或不定式（need to do）搭配。例如“need to reply to clients”和“also update the project with my partner”。另外“e-mail”改为复数形式更自然。建议多注意动词时态与动词不定式结构（need to + 动词原形）。

× So I usually reply them through e-mail.

✓ So I usually reply to them by e-mail.

动词reply通常与介词to连用：reply to somebody；而表示方式用by e-mail更常见。原句使用through e-mail不如by e-mail自然。建议记住常见动词搭配，如reply to, respond to。

× I usually send emails to my partner every day because we need to keep updated about the project and also we have to report to the manager so we mainly use the e-mail to update it each other.

✓ I usually send emails to my partner every day because we need to keep each other updated about the project and we also have to report to the manager, so we mainly use e-mail to update one another.

句子中时态与句子结构不连贯：应使用一般现在时来描述习惯性动作；短语“keep updated”需加宾语“each other”或用被动/完成结构表明互相更新信息。另外“update it each other”语序错误，应为“keep each other updated”或“update one another”。建议学习固定短语（keep someone updated, each other/one another）和合适的代词顺序。

× I think it is not popular in China because they tend to talk by or message rather than e-mail and also they love communicated in person so.

✓ I think it is not popular in China because people tend to talk or message each other rather than use e-mail, and they also prefer communicating in person.

句中代词“they”指代不明确，且“talk by or message”结构不正确；“love communicated”动词形式错误，应为“prefer communicating”或“like to communicate”。把“they”替换为更恰当的主语“people”，并调整动词形式与搭配。建议注意代词指代的一致性和动词搭配（prefer + -ing / like to + 动词）。

× Yes, I think it will because e-mail like a formal version of letter and in nowadays the people tend to convenient and more easy to say, so they prefer using message or testing rather than e-mail.

✓ Yes, I think it will, because e-mail is like a formal version of a letter and nowadays people tend to prefer convenience and easier ways to communicate, so they prefer using messages or instant messaging rather than e-mail.

原句未来时表达不完整（“I think it will”后应有完整谓语）；“e-mail like”缺少系动词，应该是“e-mail is like”；“in nowadays”不自然，应为“nowadays”；“tend to convenient”应为“tend to prefer convenience”或“find it more convenient”；“testing”疑为“texting/instant messaging”的误写。建议注意主系表结构（be + 表语）、固定短语（nowadays, prefer + 名词/动名词）以及单词拼写（texting）。