艺术— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢绘画的观点，但语法和用词上有些错误，比如“was dreamed”应为“dreamed”，以及“often drawing”应为“often draw”。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I like drawing very much. When I was young, I dreamed of becoming an artist. Drawing helps me relax and reduce stress. For example, I often draw on weekends, which makes me feel calm and peaceful.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“Will kind of”应为“Well, kind of”，“a friend invent me”应为“a friend invites me”。建议加强语法准确性，使用更自然的表达，并注意句子连贯性。

範例: Well, kind of. I usually go to art galleries only when there is a famous exhibition or when a friend invites me. I remember once visiting a gallery to see a girl's paintings. Although it was very crowded, seeing the artworks up close was definitely worth it.

建議: 回答表达了学习艺术的兴趣，但存在语法错误，如“it will makes me became”应为“it will make me become”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, definitely. As I mentioned, I really enjoy drawing. If I have the chance to learn more about art, it will help me become more professional. I'm also interested in art history because it helps me understand how society has evolved.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“was used to learn”应为“used to learn”，“let my dad to finish”应为“let my dad finish”。建议加强语法基础，避免重复表达，句子应更简洁连贯。

範例: Yes, I used to learn drawing when I was a child. However, I was too young to understand the importance of learning skills. Sometimes, after finishing my lessons, I would ask my dad to help me complete the homework.

× When I was young I was dreamed to be an artist.

✓ When I was young I dreamed to be an artist.

这里的动词dream应该用一般过去时dreamed，而不是过去进行时was dreamed。过去进行时表示动作正在进行，而这里表达的是过去的一个愿望或梦想，应该用一般过去时。

× For example I often drawing on the weekend and it make me feel calming.

✓ For example I often draw on the weekend and it makes me feel calm.

动词draw在此处应使用一般现在时的原形draw，因为主语是I且是习惯性动作。make后面接的形容词应为calm而非calming，calm表示使人感到平静，calming是现在分词作形容词，通常用来修饰名词。

× I often drawing on the weekend

✓ I often draw on the weekend

动词draw在此处应使用一般现在时的原形draw，因为主语是I且是习惯性动作。

× it make me feel calming.

✓ it makes me feel calm.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词make应加-s变为makes。

× Will kind of I think I just go to art galleries when it has a famous exhibition or a friend invent me.

✓ Well, kind of. I think I just go to art galleries when there is a famous exhibition or a friend invites me.

1. 'Will'应为感叹词'Well'。2. 'it has'应改为'there is'，表示存在某个展览。3. 'a friend invent me'中的'invent'用错，应为'invite'，表示邀请。

× when it has a famous exhibition

✓ when there is a famous exhibition

表示存在某物时，应使用there is结构，而不是it has。

× a friend invent me

✓ a friend invites me

动词应为invite，且主语是friend，谓语动词应为第三人称单数形式invites。

× I remember once I go to art galleries to see one girl's painting.

✓ I remember once I went to art galleries to see one girl's painting.

回忆过去的动作，动词go应使用过去式went。

× when seeing the paintings so close it's worth it.

✓ seeing the paintings so closely is worth it.

动名词短语作主语时，后面应使用副词修饰动词，故用closely而非close。

× it will makes me became more professional

✓ it will make me become more professional

情态动词will后接动词原形make，不能加-s。become是动词原形，不应用became（过去式）。

× I was used to learn drawing as a child.

✓ I used to learn drawing as a child.

表达过去习惯用used to + 动词原形，was used to + 名词/动名词表示习惯于。此处应用used to learn。

× I was too young to know how the importance about learning skills.

✓ I was too young to know the importance of learning skills.

'importance'后应接介词of而非about。

× So when I finish my lesson, I just let my dad to finish the homework.

✓ So when I finished my lesson, I just let my dad finish the homework.

1. 过去时间应使用finished。2. let后接动词原形，不能加to。

× Help me finish the homework.

✓ He helped me finish the homework.

句子缺少主语，且时态应与上下文一致，故补充主语He并用过去式helped。