天赋— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、文法を正しく使い、簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: Yes, I am good at predicting horse races, which are held every weekend. I often win and earn some money from it.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。時制や語順に注意し、明確にいつ始めたかを述べるようにしましょう。

範例: I started mastering this skill recently because horse racing is prohibited for people under 20. Since I am 23 now, I began predicting horse races about three years ago.

建議: 内容が不明瞭で、語彙の誤用が多いです。才能がどのように将来の仕事に役立つかを具体的に説明し、適切な語彙を使いましょう。

範例: I believe my talent for predicting horse races can help me in my future career as a stock analyst because both require analyzing patterns and making predictions.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。家族の意見や態度について明確に述べ、簡潔に答えましょう。

範例: No, my family does not like horse racing, so I am the only person in my family who enjoys gambling on it.

× I think I'm a good heart predicting host race.

✓ I think I'm good at predicting horse races.

The original sentence has singular/plural confusion and incorrect word usage. 'host race' should be 'horse races' (plural) because horse racing events occur regularly. Also, 'a good heart predicting' is incorrect; it should be 'good at predicting'.

× Who's race held in every weekend?

✓ The horse races are held every weekend.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Who's race' instead of 'The horse races'. Also, 'in every weekend' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'every weekend'.

× I win in every weekend.

✓ I win every weekend.

The phrase 'win in every weekend' is incorrect. The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'win every weekend'.

× To some money.

✓ I win some money.

The phrase 'To some money' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I win some money'. The preposition 'to' is not needed here.

× I must have it very recently becaused the horse racing is prohibited under 20.

✓ I must have learned it very recently because horse racing is prohibited under 20.

The phrase 'must have it' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'must have learned it'. Also, 'becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'.

× I'm just I'm 23 so 3 years ago I started to predict horse race then.

✓ I'm 23, so I started predicting horse races 3 years ago.

The sentence is awkward and has tense issues. 'Started to predict' is better as 'started predicting'. Also, 'horse race' should be plural 'horse races'.

× I have skill.

✓ I have the skill.

The phrase 'I have skill' is incomplete. It should be 'I have the skill' or 'I have skills'. Here, 'the skill' fits better.

× I think my torrent can be used for because predicting whole faces.

✓ I think my talent can be useful because I can predict horse races.

'Torrent' is a typo for 'talent'. 'Used for because predicting whole faces' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'useful because I can predict horse races'. 'Whole faces' is a mishearing of 'horse races'.

× Something like an analyzing SO.

✓ Something like analyzing stocks.

The phrase 'analyzing SO' is unclear and likely a mishearing. It should be 'analyzing stocks'.

× I could be a stock analyst. In what Economix.

✓ I could be a stock analyst in economics.

'In what Economix' is incorrect. It should be 'in economics'.

× No, my family. Don't like horse racing like campus so I'm re person too.

✓ No, my family doesn't like horse racing, and I'm a responsible person too.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'Don't' should be 'doesn't' for singular 'family' (subject-verb agreement). 'Like campus' is unclear; likely 'like gambling'. 'I'm re person too' is unclear; possibly 'I'm a responsible person too'.

× Gamble in my house.

✓ There is no gambling in my house.

The sentence fragment 'Gamble in my house' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'There is no gambling in my house' to convey the intended meaning.