天赋— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and somewhat confusing. Try to directly state your talent and explain it clearly without unnecessary words like 'Bye'. Also, avoid repetition and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I have a special talent for whistling. I can produce various melodies and sounds using whistling. It is something I enjoy doing in my free time and it helps me relax.

建議: Your answer repeats the previous response and does not address the question. Please answer directly whether you mastered the talent recently or when you were young, and provide supporting details.

範例: I started whistling when I was a child and have practiced it over the years. So, I mastered this talent gradually since my childhood.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid vague statements and explain why your talent may or may not be useful.

範例: I don't think my talent for whistling will be useful for my future work because in my country, whistling is sometimes considered inappropriate. Therefore, it is not valued as a professional skill.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent.

範例: No, nobody in my family has the same talent as me because whistling is quite unique. Each family member has their own talents and they focus on perfecting their skills.

× Yes, I have a talent. And I will call it this link.

✓ Yes, I have a talent. And I call it this link.

The use of 'will call' is incorrect here because the student is referring to a current fact, not a future action. The present simple tense 'call' is appropriate to express a habitual or current state.

× This link is my great talent 'cause I can produce various kinds of songs and sounds.

✓ This link is my great talent because I can produce various kinds of songs and sounds.

The word 'cause' is an informal contraction of 'because' and is inappropriate in formal speech or writing. Using 'because' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× Bye. I'm just whistling.

✓ By the way, I'm just whistling.

'Bye' is a farewell expression and does not fit the context. The student likely meant 'By the way' to add additional information. Correct pronoun and phrase usage improves clarity.

× Was it mastered recently or when you were young?

✓ Did you master it recently or when you were young?

The question should use the auxiliary 'did' with the base verb 'master' to form the past tense question correctly. 'Was it mastered' is passive and less natural here.

× I think. My everything talent is not useful for my future work becauses in my country it is considered obscene to whistle and they do not consider his ad. As a talent.

✓ I think my talent is not useful for my future work because in my country it is considered obscene to whistle and they do not consider it as a talent.

The phrase 'My everything talent' is incorrect; 'my talent' suffices. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'His ad.' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'it' should be used to refer to whistling. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× For example. There are many things I can do, but whistling will not help me in future.

✓ For example, there are many things I can do, but whistling will not help me in the future.

The period after 'For example' should be a comma to connect the sentence properly. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' to be grammatically correct.

× No, nobody has the same talent as mine because it is kind of unique talent and mine, my family, everybody has their own talent and work, so they are perfected their work and I am perfect at my work.

✓ No, nobody has the same talent as mine because it is a kind of unique talent, and in my family, everybody has their own talent and work, so they have perfected their work and I am perfect at my work.

The phrase 'kind of unique talent and mine' is awkward; adding 'a' before 'kind' is necessary. 'My family' should be introduced properly with a preposition. 'They are perfected their work' is incorrect; it should be 'they have perfected their work' to use the present perfect tense correctly.