天赋— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более связные предложения, чтобы ответ был естественным и понятным.

範例: I am good at running because I used to run often when I was a child. I even won first place in competitions several times, which shows my talent in this area.

建議: Ответ содержит ошибки в словоупотреблении и грамматике. Следует использовать правильные слова и более четко выражать мысли, чтобы ответ был логичным и связным.

範例: I mastered running when I was young, but I stopped running three years ago due to COVID-19. Now, I regret not practicing and sometimes I want to start running again.

建議: Ваш ответ немного повторяется и содержит грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова и более точные формулировки для улучшения связности и ясности.

範例: Yes, I believe my running talent will be useful in the future because it helps me stay healthy. Also, in an emergency, being a good runner could help me save my life.

建議: Ответ нечеткий и содержит ошибки. Рекомендуется строить предложения более грамотно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: Yes, I have three brothers, and all of them are good runners. In fact, I am not as good as they are. Two of my brothers even participate in marathons like the Dakar Rally.

× Actually I don't have a lot of talents, but I know one thing I'm really good at running because when I was child I often run so and I even I won first place around competition every year and I fell runner's height so. Now.

✓ Actually I don't have a lot of talents, but I know one thing I'm really good at running because when I was a child I often ran and I even won first place in competitions every year and I fell runner's high. Now.

The word 'child' is singular and needs the article 'a' before it. The verb 'run' should be in past tense 'ran' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Around competition' is incorrect; it should be 'in competitions' to indicate participation. 'Fell runner's height' is unclear but likely meant 'felt runner's high', which is an expression. These corrections improve singular/plural usage and verb tense consistency.

× Actually I don't have a lot of talents, but I know one thing I'm really good at running because when I was child I often run so and I even I won first place around competition every year and I fell runner's height so. Now.

✓ Actually I don't have a lot of talents, but I know one thing I'm really good at running because when I was a child I often ran and I even won first place in competitions every year and I felt runner's high. Now.

The verb 'run' should be in past tense 'ran' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child'. Also, 'fell' should be 'felt' to correctly express the feeling experienced. Using correct past tense verbs is essential for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Unfortunately, it was my search recently. I stopped running three years ago because of COVID-19 and then now I'm out of practice. But now I'm regret about that. I just sometimes want to run and be.

✓ Unfortunately, it was my search recently. I stopped running three years ago because of COVID-19 and now I'm out of practice. But now I regret that. I sometimes just want to run and be active.

The phrase 'I'm regret about that' is incorrect; 'regret' is a verb and should not be used with 'I'm'. The correct form is 'I regret that'. Also, 'just sometimes want to run and be' is incomplete; adding 'active' clarifies the meaning. These corrections fix verb usage and sentence completeness.

× I even I won first place around competition every year

✓ I even won first place in competitions every year

The preposition 'around' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate participation in events is 'in'. Using the correct preposition is important for conveying the intended meaning.

× and even I could say I'm not good like them in the running so and even my two brothers are to Daka.

✓ and I could even say I'm not as good as them at running, and even my two brothers are too fast. So that's why, and yes, that's all.

The phrase 'not good like them' should be 'not as good as them' to correctly compare abilities. 'My two brothers are to Daka' is unclear; likely intended 'too fast'. Correct pronoun and comparative structures are necessary for clarity.