天赋— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول تبقى إجابتك أوضح ومنظمة أكتر. استخدم جمل بسيطة وواضحة، وابتعد عن التكرار والأخطاء اللغوية. مثلاً، وضح ليه بتحب كرة السلة وتأثيرها على صحتك بشكل مباشر.

範例: Yes, I am good at playing basketball. It helps me stay healthy and fit because it is a good exercise. Also, playing basketball improves my speed and coordination.

建議: ركز على الإجابة بشكل مباشر وواضح. حاول تستخدم جمل مترابطة ومنطقية، ووضح متى بدأت تتقن المهارة بدقة بدون معلومات غير واضحة أو مبهمة.

範例: I started playing basketball when I was young, and I have improved my skills over the years. I even represented my school in competitions.

建議: حاول توضح فكرتك بشكل أفضل وتستخدم كلمات مناسبة. اشرح كيف يمكن لمهارتك أن تفيدك في المستقبل بشكل عملي وواضح.

範例: Yes, I believe playing basketball will help me stay healthy and active in the future. It also teaches me teamwork and discipline, which are useful skills for any job.

建議: حاول تبني إجابتك بشكل أفضل مع جمل واضحة ومنظمة. اذكر العلاقة بينك وبين الشخص الذي لديه نفس الموهبة بشكل مباشر وواضح.

範例: Yes, I think I inherited my talent from my dad. He is good at basketball and football, and he keeps his body healthy and fit.

× My talent is playing basketball because playing basketball can make my body more simple.

✓ My talent is playing basketball because playing basketball can make my body stronger.

The word 'simple' is incorrectly used to describe the body. The correct adjective should be 'stronger' to express improvement in physical condition.

× That help me to to playing sport quickly and make my body healthy and fit.

✓ That helps me to play sports quickly and makes my body healthy and fit.

The phrase 'help me to to playing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'helps me to play'. Also, 'sport' should be plural 'sports' to generalize the activity.

× That help me to to playing sport quickly and make my body healthy and fit.

✓ That helps me to play sports quickly and makes my body healthy and fit.

The subject 'That' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject.

× Was it mastered recently or when you were young?

✓ Did you master it recently or when you were young?

The question should use 'Did you master' to correctly form the past tense question instead of 'Was it mastered' which is passive and awkward here.

× Both of them and I have a middle from my school because I being the first one playing that sport and the world actually around the world asked me to play with them.

✓ Both, and I have a medal from my school because I was the first one playing that sport, and people from around the world actually asked me to play with them.

'Middle' is incorrect; it should be 'medal'. 'I being' is incorrect; it should be 'I was'. Also, 'the world actually around the world' is redundant and awkward; 'people from around the world' is better.

× the world actually around the world asked me to play with them.

✓ people from around the world asked me to play with them.

The phrase 'the world actually around the world' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'from' to indicate origin.

× Yes, I think that because they're playing basketball can make you avoid many diseases when you get a age 1516 that can help you and your mind remember quickly and make you stronger body.

✓ Yes, I think that playing basketball can help you avoid many diseases when you are 15 or 16 years old; it can also help your mind remember things quickly and make your body stronger.

'They're playing basketball' is incorrect; it should be 'playing basketball'. 'Get a age 1516' is incorrect; it should be 'are 15 or 16 years old'. Also, 'make you stronger body' should be 'make your body stronger'.

× Yes, I think I gift it from my dad because my dad is a good player and for basketball and football and the body has a good fit and healthy.

✓ Yes, I think I got the gift from my dad because my dad is a good player in basketball and football, and he has a fit and healthy body.

'I gift it from my dad' is incorrect; it should be 'I got the gift from my dad'. 'And for basketball and football' is awkward; 'in basketball and football' is correct. 'The body has a good fit and healthy' is incorrect; it should be 'he has a fit and healthy body'.