天赋— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you have a talent or something you are good at?
考生
Yes, I'm good at singing and dancing because I find them both interesting and energetic that help me relax after a busy day and make me feel more excited and motivated for the task ahead For example, when I sing or dance, I can express my.
考官
Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
考生
When I was young, I master in singing and dancing because I have a opportunity to going to a singing class so that I can how to sing and dance exactly.
考官
Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
考生
Yes, I think my talent is really useful for my future work because I want to be a singer so that I need to sing accurately and perform dance moves really well.
考官
Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?
考生
No, I don't think anyone in my family has the same talent as me. For example, my sister is a teacher, my mother is a business woman, so we have different skills and interests.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you have a talent or something you are good at?
分數: 65.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và chưa hoàn chỉnh, cần tránh lặp lại ý và kết thúc câu một cách rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Yes, I am good at singing and dancing. I enjoy them because they help me relax and boost my energy after a busy day. For instance, when I sing or dance, I can express my emotions freely, which makes me feel happier and more motivated.
Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
分數: 55.0建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'master' thay vì 'mastered', 'have a opportunity' nên là 'had an opportunity'.
範例: I mastered singing and dancing when I was young because I had the opportunity to attend singing classes. This helped me learn how to sing and dance properly.
Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
分數: 70.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên mở rộng ý bằng cách giải thích thêm về tầm quan trọng của tài năng trong công việc tương lai.
範例: Yes, I believe my talent will be very useful for my future career because I want to be a singer. Therefore, I need to sing accurately and perform dance moves well to entertain my audience and succeed in the music industry.
Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?
分數: 75.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng ý hơn một chút.
範例: No, I don't think anyone in my family has the same talent as me because my sister is a teacher and my mother is a businesswoman. So, we all have different skills and interests, which makes our family diverse.
文法
× When I was young, I master in singing and dancing because I have a opportunity to going to a singing class so that I can how to sing and dance exactly.
✓ When I was young, I mastered singing and dancing because I had an opportunity to go to a singing class so that I could learn how to sing and dance correctly.
The verb 'master' should be in the past tense 'mastered' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was young'. 'Have' should be in past tense 'had' to agree with the past context. 'A opportunity' is incorrect; it should be 'an opportunity' because 'opportunity' starts with a vowel sound. 'Going' should be 'go' after 'to' as the infinitive form is required. 'Can how to sing' is incorrect; it should be 'could learn how to sing' to express ability in the past and the correct verb usage. 'Exactly' is better replaced with 'correctly' to describe the manner of singing and dancing.
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