天赋— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言不够自然流畅，存在语法错误和重复表达，且句子较长且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达兴趣和能力。

範例: Yes, I am good at computer science and technology because I am very interested in this field and I learn new concepts quickly.

建議: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议明确表达学习时间，避免语法错误，并使用连贯的句子。

範例: I did not master it when I was young because my family was poor and we did not have a good computer at that time.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，清楚表达职业目标和相关知识的益处。

範例: Yes, my talent is useful because I want to be a communications engineer, and knowledge of computer science will help me in this career.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不准确，且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的语法，明确表达家人兴趣不同，并给出具体例子。

範例: No, no one in my family has the same talent in communications because they have different interests. For example, my brother prefers religious activities.

× I personally consider that I have a great plan that learning the computer science and technology and the techno technology because I very interested in the major and, uh, I always learn this type of knowledge quickly.

✓ I personally consider that I have a great plan to learn computer science and technology because I am very interested in the major, and I always learn this type of knowledge quickly.

动词后面接动名词（-ing形式）时，需注意动词搭配。这里“plan”后应接不定式“to learn”，而不是动名词“learning”。另外，“I very interested”缺少系动词，应为“I am very interested”。

× I personally consider that I have a great plan that learning the computer science and technology and the techno technology because I very interested in the major and, uh, I always learn this type of knowledge quickly.

✓ I personally consider that I have a great plan to learn computer science and technology because I am very interested in the major, and I always learn this type of knowledge quickly.

“I very interested”中“very”修饰形容词“interested”，但缺少系动词“am”，应改为“I am very interested”。

× Well, actually not because, uh, when I was young, I, uh, I really touched the computer science and science technologies because my families is a little poor to have a great commuter.

✓ Well, actually not because, when I was young, I really got in touch with computer science and technologies because my family was a little poor to have a great computer.

“touched”用词不当，表达“接触”应使用“got in touch with”。“families”应为单数“family”，且“is”应改为过去时“was”，因为描述过去情况。

× Well, actually not because, uh, when I was young, I, uh, I really touched the computer science and science technologies because my families is a little poor to have a great commuter.

✓ Well, actually not because, when I was young, I really got in touch with computer science and technologies because my family was a little poor to have a great computer.

“families”应为单数“family”，表示一个家庭。

× Well, actually not because, uh, when I was young, I, uh, I really touched the computer science and science technologies because my families is a little poor to have a great commuter.

✓ Well, actually not because, when I was young, I really got in touch with computer science and technologies because my family was a little poor to have a great computer.

“a little poor”中“a little”修饰不可数形容词“poor”时，表达不自然，建议直接用“was poor”或“was a bit poor”。

× my families is a little poor to have a great commuter.

✓ my family was a little poor to have a great computer.

“families”应为单数“family”，且“commuter”拼写错误，应为“computer”。

× Absolutely, because my major is precise and I want to be a communications engineer in the in the future work and this career I would like me to knew more about the computer science technology and I think that it's kind of knowledge would also be have beneficial.

✓ Absolutely, because my major is precise and I want to be a communications engineer in future work, and in this career I would like to know more about computer science technology, and I think that this kind of knowledge would also be beneficial.

“I would like me to knew”中“me”不应出现，应为“I would like to know”。“knew”是过去式，应使用动词原形“know”。

× Absolutely, because my major is precise and I want to be a communications engineer in the in the future work and this career I would like me to knew more about the computer science technology and I think that it's kind of knowledge would also be have beneficial.

✓ Absolutely, because my major is precise and I want to be a communications engineer in future work, and in this career I would like to know more about computer science technology, and I think that this kind of knowledge would also be beneficial.

“knew”是过去式，句中表达愿望应使用动词原形“know”。

× Absolutely, because my major is precise and I want to be a communications engineer in the in the future work and this career I would like me to knew more about the computer science technology and I think that it's kind of knowledge would also be have beneficial.

✓ Absolutely, because my major is precise and I want to be a communications engineer in future work, and in this career I would like to know more about computer science technology, and I think that this kind of knowledge would also be beneficial.

“would also be have beneficial”中“have”多余，应去掉，正确表达为“would also be beneficial”。

× Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent? Well, umm, I am afraid to say that there's no person in my family have the same tend with me in the communications aspect because they are more interested in other major for example, my brother uh, prefer to praying.

✓ Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent? Well, umm, I am afraid to say that there is no person in my family who has the same talent as me in the communications aspect because they are more interested in other majors; for example, my brother prefers praying.

“there's no person... have”主谓不一致，应为“there is no person... who has”。“tend”应为“talent”。“major”应为复数“majors”。“my brother uh, prefer”主谓不一致，应为“my brother prefers”。

× there's no person in my family have the same tend with me in the communications aspect because they are more interested in other major for example, my brother uh, prefer to praying.

✓ there is no person in my family who has the same talent as me in the communications aspect because they are more interested in other majors; for example, my brother prefers praying.

主语“person”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”。

× there's no person in my family have the same tend with me in the communications aspect because they are more interested in other major for example, my brother uh, prefer to praying.

✓ there is no person in my family who has the same talent as me in the communications aspect because they are more interested in other majors; for example, my brother prefers praying.

“have the same tend with me”中“with”用法不当，应使用“as”表示比较对象，即“the same talent as me”。

× my brother uh, prefer to praying.

✓ my brother prefers praying.

“prefer to praying”结构错误，动词“prefer”后直接接动名词“praying”或不定式“to pray”，这里用“prefers praying”更自然。