广告— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and confusing phrases (e.g., 'food of jewellery'). To improve, try to use clear and correct vocabulary, and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I remember an advertisement for Jollibee from my childhood. Whenever I smell food from that restaurant, it reminds me of the delicious taste of their burgers. Even after 20 years, the ad still stays in my memory because it was very catchy.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make it coherent. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to provide more specific examples.

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and other public transport. For instance, there is a food advertisement that looks very appetizing, and whenever I see it, I feel hungry and want to try the food.

建議: Your answer shows your opinion but is incomplete and a bit unclear at the end. Try to finish your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'kind of'.

範例: I usually find advertisements irritating, especially when they interrupt movies on my phone. However, I do look for advertisements when I want to find good deals or new products, so I have mixed feelings about them.

建議: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by correcting grammar (e.g., 'advertisements that offer') and by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly.

範例: I usually like advertisements that offer promotions on clothes or food because I enjoy shopping and trying new dishes. These kinds of ads attract me because they show enticing offers.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and informal language. To improve, use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I often see many advertisements when I watch movies on Facebook. These ads can be quite annoying because they interrupt my concentration and disrupt the viewing experience.

× Yes, I always remember this ads on Jollibee.

✓ Yes, I always remember these ads on Jollibee.

The word 'ads' is plural, so the demonstrative pronoun should be 'these' instead of 'this' to agree in number.

× Whenever I smell the food of jewellery, if I'm outside of it, I can remember the taste of the burger.

✓ Whenever I smell the food from Jollibee, even if I'm outside of it, I can remember the taste of the burger.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'from' is the correct preposition to indicate the source of the food. Also, 'jewellery' seems to be a typo for 'Jollibee', a fast-food chain.

× Yes, I see several advertising on trains and other transport.

✓ Yes, I see several advertisements on trains and other transport.

The word 'advertising' is uncountable and does not fit here; 'advertisements' is the correct plural noun. Also, 'on' is correct preposition for 'trains' and 'other transport'.

× For example, I always see this food that was so appetizing that whenever I see this ad I would always crave for food.

✓ For example, I always see this food that is so appetizing that whenever I see this ad I always crave food.

The verb tense should be present 'is' to match the habitual action. Also, 'crave for' is incorrect; 'crave' does not require 'for'.

× So I don't like advertisements, but when I am looking for something good, I would go search for advertisements.

✓ So I don't like advertisements, but when I am looking for something good, I will go search for advertisements.

The modal verb 'would' implies conditional or habitual past action; 'will' is more appropriate here to express future intention.

× I usually like advertisements that offers promotions like clothes or food because I love shopping and I like to try some dishes that are enticing.

✓ I usually like advertisements that offer promotions like clothes or food because I love shopping and I like to try some dishes that are enticing.

The subject 'advertisements' is plural, so the verb should be 'offer' instead of 'offers' to agree in number.

× So those are the kinds of ad that I would like to.

✓ So those are the kinds of ads that I would like to.

The plural form 'ads' should be used to agree with 'kinds of', which implies plural.

× Yes, when I am watching a movie on Facebooks, there's a lot of advertisements that comes out while watching and it's kinda kind of annoying because it interrupts my concentration on what seeing the movie.

✓ Yes, when I am watching a movie on Facebook, there are a lot of advertisements that come out while watching and it's kind of annoying because it interrupts my concentration on watching the movie.

'Facebooks' should be singular 'Facebook'. 'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with plural 'advertisements'. The verb 'comes' should be 'come' to agree with plural subject. 'Kinda kind of' is redundant; 'kind of' is correct. 'On what seeing the movie' is incorrect; 'on watching the movie' is correct.