游泳— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là chia động từ cho đúng (ví dụ: 'help' nên là 'helps'). Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh lặp từ và có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy swimming because it helps me stay healthy and relax after school. When I was a child, swimming also helped me grow taller.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ câu 'I learned how to swim is very difficult' nên sửa lại cho đúng. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'a seven years old' nên là 'seven years old'.

範例: Yes, learning how to swim was very difficult for me because I was afraid of water. However, after practicing regularly, I became more confident and by the time I was seven years old, I could swim 100 meters.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có so sánh, tuy nhiên cần chú ý chính tả và từ vựng, ví dụ 'reflexing' nên là 'relaxing'. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: People in my country like to swim in both swimming pools and at the beach. Many prefer swimming in the sea because it is very relaxing. However, others enjoy pools because they are safer and cleaner.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'convenient' nên dùng trong câu đúng ngữ cảnh, 'free website' có thể là lỗi đánh máy, nên là 'free beach'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn với liên từ phù hợp.

範例: For me, the main difference between swimming in a pool and in the sea is convenience. Pools are usually easier to access whenever we want, but we have to pay an entrance fee. On the other hand, swimming at a free beach can be less safe and there is a risk of drowning.

× Swimming is one of my favorite outdoor sports activities because it help me stay healthy and relax after school.

✓ Swimming is one of my favorite outdoor sports activities because it helps me stay healthy and relax after school.

The subject 'it' refers to 'swimming', which is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving singular and plural forms.

× When I was a child, swimming help me improve my height.

✓ When I was a child, swimming helped me improve my height.

The verb 'help' should be in the past tense 'helped' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was a child'. This is a past tense issue.

× Yes, I learned how to swim is very difficult for me because I am afraid of water.

✓ Yes, I learned that learning how to swim was very difficult for me because I was afraid of water.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and tense. 'Learned how to swim is' is incorrect; it should be 'learned that learning how to swim was' to correctly express past difficulty. Also, 'am afraid' should be 'was afraid' to maintain past tense consistency.

× However, after practicing regularly, I became more confident and when I was a seven years old, I could swim 100 meters.

✓ However, after practicing regularly, I became more confident and when I was seven years old, I could swim 100 meters.

The phrase 'a seven years old' is incorrect; 'seven years old' does not need an article 'a'. This is a singular/plural and article usage issue.

× Many people prefer swimming in the sea because this is very reflexing.

✓ Many people prefer swimming in the sea because it is very relaxing.

The word 'reflexing' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'relaxing' to describe the feeling. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× Pools are usually easier to go swimming when we want, but we must buy the entrance fee.

✓ Pools are usually easier to go swimming in when we want, but we must pay the entrance fee.

The phrase 'easier to go swimming' needs the preposition 'in' to be correct. Also, 'buy the entrance fee' should be 'pay the entrance fee'. This involves incorrect preposition use and verb collocation.

× On the other hand, swimming in the free website can be less safe and easy to drown.

✓ On the other hand, swimming in free areas can be less safe and it is easy to drown.

'Free website' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'free areas' or 'free places'. Also, 'easy to drown' needs a subject like 'it is easy to drown'. This is incorrect use of nouns and sentence structure.