朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and confusing sentence structure. Try to give a direct answer with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

範例: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known since childhood. His name is Bastei Ruble, and we have shared many memories together over the years.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and then add specific activities you do with your friends. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I usually go to the movies or visit cafes with my friends. We enjoy watching films together and trying different kinds of food at cafes.

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by using complete sentences and better linking words. Also, avoid repeating phrases from previous answers; instead, rephrase to show variety.

範例: We often meet at cinemas to watch movies or at cafes where we can chat and enjoy some snacks.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Make sure to understand the question and respond clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases.

範例: I don't go out with my friends very often because my parents are strict. However, whenever I get a chance, I definitely go out with them.

建議: Your answer shows your feelings but needs clearer sentence structure and vocabulary. Try to express your ideas in a more natural and coherent way, using linking words to connect your thoughts.

範例: Friends are very important to me because I value strong relationships. I want to maintain these friendships throughout my life.

建議: Your answer is short but clear. To improve, add more supporting details and use linking words to explain your preference more fully.

範例: Since I am an extrovert, I prefer spending time with a group of friends because I enjoy lively conversations and social activities.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Give specific examples of occasions when you invite friends to your home.

範例: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home, especially during my birthday and when we have group projects to work on together.

× Bing, myself, an extrovert personality our number of friends to my gnomes since my childhood well, one of my closer friends to whom I'll. Known from a long period of time as none other than my Bastei Ruble.

✓ Being an extrovert personality, I have had a number of friends since my childhood. One of my closer friends, whom I've known for a long time, is none other than my bestie Ruble.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear references. 'Myself' is incorrectly used instead of 'I'. 'I'll. Known' is incorrect; it should be 'I've known'. Also, 'gnomes' seems to be a typo for 'friends'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Ask my friends love all things so just to go for movies and two went to cafe's food eating, so I often do such things with my friends.

✓ My friends love all kinds of activities, so we just go to movies and sometimes go to cafes to eat. I often do such things with my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Ask' instead of 'As' and has awkward phrasing. 'Two went' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes go'. The verb forms are corrected to present tense and proper participle forms for clarity.

× As I mentioned earlier, my friends love to go full movies and. Eating so we often meet at cinemas and cafes.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, my friends love to go for movies and eat, so we often meet at cinemas and cafes.

The phrase 'go full movies' is incorrect; it should be 'go for movies'. Also, 'and. Eating' is fragmented and should be 'and eat'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected for grammatical accuracy.

× Ask my baby is not allowed me to go. More read my friends so if I anytime get John so definitely go.

✓ My parents do not allow me to go out with my friends often, but if I get a chance, I definitely go.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and has unclear meaning. 'Ask my baby' is incorrect; it should be 'My parents'. 'Is not allowed me' is incorrect; it should be 'do not allow me'. The sentence is corrected to use proper modal verb structure and clarity.

× As I am very sensitive about keeping my relationship so friend sort. Very important to me. And I want to keep them till my last breath.

✓ As I am very sensitive about keeping my relationships, friends are very important to me. I want to keep them till my last breath.

The phrase 'friend sort' is incorrect; it should be 'friends are'. The quantifier and noun agreement is corrected. Also, 'relationship' is pluralized to 'relationships' to match the context.

× Ends as being an extrovert personality. I love to spend time with the group of friends.

✓ As I am an extrovert personality, I love to spend time with a group of friends.

'Ends' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'As'. 'The group of friends' is better expressed as 'a group of friends' to indicate any group. Pronouns and articles are corrected for clarity.

× Yes, there several times that I invent my friends to my phone as during my birthday Anne when I ever we have assigned a group project to do.

✓ Yes, there have been several times that I invited my friends to my home, such as during my birthday and when we had a group project to do.

'Invent' is incorrect; it should be 'invited'. 'Phone' is a typo for 'home'. 'Anne' is a typo for 'and'. The sentence is corrected for proper verb tense and pronoun use.