朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan jelas, misalnya dengan menggunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan tata bahasa yang benar. Hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

範例: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since we were in junior high school.

建議: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan tata bahasa yang benar. Gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren dan hindari kesalahan tata bahasa.

範例: I usually hang out with him by going to the mall or exploring nature with other friends. Also, when we have exams, we spend time studying together.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan alami. Hindari kata yang tidak jelas seperti 'cold cold' dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren.

範例: We often meet at school because we go there together every day. After classes, we usually hang out or have lunch together.

建議: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

範例: Yes, I often go out with him because he is a friend I trust and enjoy spending time with.

建議: Perjelas maksud kalimat dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat. Hindari kalimat yang membingungkan dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan koheren.

範例: Friends are very important to me because they always support me in difficult times and stand by my side.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren dan hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap.

範例: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because it's more enjoyable. However, if I talk about trust, I would choose one close friend.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan terstruktur. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren.

範例: Yes, I have invited my friend to my home before. One day, after hanging out, it was too late for him to go back, so I asked him to stay overnight.

× I have a friend that I have known a long time since we were in junior high school.

✓ I have a friend that I have known for a long time since we were in junior high school.

The phrase 'a long time' requires the preposition 'for' to indicate duration. Without 'for', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I usually hang out with him to go to the mall or maybe explore the nature with the other friends or maybe if we getting an exam we spend time to studying together.

✓ I usually hang out with him to go to the mall or maybe explore nature with other friends, or maybe if we are getting an exam, we spend time studying together.

The phrase 'if we getting an exam' is incorrect; it should be 'if we are getting an exam' to use the present continuous tense properly. Also, 'spend time to studying' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time studying' because 'spend time' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. 'The nature' is incorrect; 'nature' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× At school because we everyday go to school together and after cold cold we spend our time together, we hang out together or have lunch together.

✓ At school because we go to school together every day, and after school, we spend our time together; we hang out together or have lunch together.

The phrase 'we everyday go to school' is incorrect; 'every day' should be placed after the verb 'go'. 'After cold cold' is likely a mishearing or typo and should be 'after school'. Proper prepositions and word order are necessary for clarity.

× Yes, I know because he's the one friend that I trust that I enjoy spending time with, so that's why I often go out with him.

✓ Yes, I do because he's the one friend that I trust and enjoy spending time with, so that's why I often go out with him.

The phrase 'Yes, I know' is incorrect in response to 'Do you often go out with your friends?'. The correct response is 'Yes, I do'. Also, 'that I trust that I enjoy' is better connected with 'and' for clarity.

× They are really, really important to me because they always support me when I take another pet or what. He always supports me besides me. That's why they were important to me.

✓ They are really, really important to me because they always support me when I take another path or whatever. He always supports me beside me. That's why they are important to me.

The phrase 'when I take another pet or what' is unclear; likely intended 'path or whatever'. 'Besides me' is incorrect; 'beside me' is the correct phrase meaning 'next to me'. Also, 'That's why they were important to me' should be 'are important' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because it's more enjoying but if you talk about what I trust most, I maybe choose that one friend. But we going to talk about hang out.

✓ I prefer to spend time with a group of friends because it's more enjoyable, but if you talk about who I trust most, I might choose that one friend. But we are going to talk about hanging out.

'More enjoying' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'more enjoyable'. 'I maybe choose' should be 'I might choose' to express possibility. 'We going to talk' should be 'we are going to talk' to use the correct present continuous tense. 'Talk about hang out' should be 'talk about hanging out' because 'talk about' is followed by a gerund.

× Yes, I would I ever invite my friend to come to my home because on that day we hang out together but it's too late for him to go back to the home so I asked him to sleep in my home.

✓ Yes, I would. I have invited my friend to come to my home because on that day we hung out together, but it was too late for him to go back home, so I asked him to sleep at my home.

'I would I ever invite' is incorrect; it should be 'I would' or 'I have invited'. The past event requires past tense verbs: 'hang out' to 'hung out', 'asked' is correct, but 'sleep in my home' should be 'sleep at my home'. Also, 'go back to the home' is better as 'go back home'.