朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

範例: Yes, I have some friends whom I have known since we were young, and we have maintained a good relationship until now.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复，并具体说明活动内容。

範例: Usually, if we can only contact online, we play computer games together. However, when we meet in real life, we sometimes travel or play sports together.

建議: 回答内容混乱，语法和表达错误较多，难以理解。建议简化句子，明确表达地点和时间，避免无意义的词汇。

範例: We often meet in our hometown during holidays because we live in different cities.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但有重复和语法错误。建议减少重复，使用连贯的句子表达原因和结果。

範例: Yes, we often go out together because college life is stressful. Going out helps us relax and refresh ourselves.

建議: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用准确的词汇，清楚表达朋友的重要性，并避免语法错误。

範例: I think friends are people who help you overcome challenges and support you when you have problems. They may be quiet, but they are always there when you need help.

建議: 回答结构混乱，语法错误多，表达不完整。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因。

範例: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because I enjoy socializing and meeting new people through them.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但有重复和小错误。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I usually don't invite friends to my home because there's nothing interesting to do. Instead, I prefer hanging out with them at places like the supermarket for bubble tea or playing football at the soccer field.

× Yes, I have some friends that I we know each other since we were young and we keep a good relationship till now.

✓ Yes, I have some friends that I have known since we were young and we keep a good relationship till now.

句中“that I we know”结构混乱，且“friends”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式。应改为“that I have known”，表示从过去到现在的持续状态。

× Yes, I have some friends that I we know each other since we were young and we keep a good relationship till now.

✓ Yes, I have some friends that I have known each other since we were young and we keep a good relationship till now.

“since we were young”表示从过去某时开始持续到现在，谓语动词应使用现在完成时态“have known”，而非一般现在时。

× Usually if we can only contact online, we will choose to play with some computer games together and if we we can meet each other in the real life, sometimes we will choose to go go to travel or play it or do some sports together.

✓ Usually if we can only contact online, we will choose to play some computer games together and if we can meet each other in real life, sometimes we will choose to travel or play or do some sports together.

“play with some computer games”中“play”后不需要“with”，应直接加宾语“play some computer games”。“go go to travel”重复且“go to travel”结构不正确，应改为“travel”。

× Usually if we can only contact online, we will choose to play with some computer games together and if we we can meet each other in the real life, sometimes we will choose to go go to travel or play it or do some sports together.

✓ Usually if we can only contact online, we will choose to play some computer games together and if we can meet each other in real life, sometimes we will choose to travel or play or do some sports together.

“do some sports”中“sports”是复数，前面“some”使用正确，但“play it”不明确，应去掉“it”。

× Actually, as we are from the Sand tower, we urge and Bernard we are in the different cities we often met each other in when we are back our hometown during the holidays or or summer holidays or actually hours.

✓ Actually, as we are from Sand Tower, and Bernard and I are in different cities, we often meet each other when we go back to our hometown during the holidays or summer holidays.

“urge and Bernard”应为“and Bernard and I”，“in the different cities”应为“in different cities”，“met”时态错误，应为现在时“meet”，“back our hometown”缺少介词“to”，应为“go back to our hometown”。

× Actually, as we are from the Sand tower, we urge and Bernard we are in the different cities we often met each other in when we are back our hometown during the holidays or or summer holidays or actually hours.

✓ Actually, as we are from Sand Tower, and Bernard and I are in different cities, we often meet each other when we go back to our hometown during the holidays or summer holidays.

“met”是过去式，但句意表达习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“meet”。

× Yes, we usually go out together as today's college life is very stressful. Stressful and and it may it really made graduates very tired. When we are together we always go out to find some ways to relax and refresh ourselves.

✓ Yes, we usually go out together as today's college life is very stressful and it really makes graduates very tired. When we are together, we always go out to find ways to relax and refresh ourselves.

“made”时态错误，应为一般现在时“makes”，且“find some ways”中“some”可省略更自然。

× I think First France is the kind of person who'd help you to overcome a challenge and support you when you meet some problems. They always keep silence, but if you need help, they are the supportive of you.

✓ I think a true friend is the kind of person who helps you overcome challenges and supports you when you have problems. They may be quiet, but if you need help, they are supportive of you.

“First France”应为“a true friend”，“who'd help”时态和语气不当，应为“who helps”，主语单数，谓语用第三人称单数形式。

× I think First France is the kind of person who'd help you to overcome a challenge and support you when you meet some problems. They always keep silence, but if you need help, they are the supportive of you.

✓ I think a true friend is the kind of person who helps you overcome challenges and supports you when you have problems. They usually keep silent, but if you need help, they are supportive of you.

“keep silence”应为“keep silent”，且“the supportive of you”结构错误，应为“supportive of you”。

× Actually, I prefer to spend time with a group of friends as I am the kind of people who like to play with more friends and if they are I played with a group of friends, they. The friends will also bring their friends and it's a good chance for me to make new friends with others. It's a big.

✓ Actually, I prefer to spend time with a group of friends as I am the kind of person who likes to play with more friends and if I play with a group of friends, they will also bring their friends and it's a good chance for me to make new friends with others.

“kind of people”应为“kind of person”，主语单数，谓语用第三人称单数“likes”。“if they are I played”结构混乱，应为“if I play”。

× Actually, I prefer to spend time with a group of friends as I am the kind of people who like to play with more friends and if they are I played with a group of friends, they. The friends will also bring their friends and it's a good chance for me to make new friends with others. It's a big.

✓ Actually, I prefer to spend time with a group of friends as I am the kind of person who likes to play with more friends. If I play with a group of friends, they will also bring their friends, and it's a good chance for me to make new friends with others.

句子结构混乱，需拆分为多个句子，调整语序，使表达清晰连贯。

× Well, I would say no, as there's nothing interesting we can do in my home. I prefer to hang out with them, like to the supermarket to drink some bubble teas or go to the the soccer fields to play football together.

✓ Well, I would say no, as there's nothing interesting we can do at my home. I prefer to hang out with them, like going to the supermarket to drink some bubble tea or going to the soccer fields to play football together.

“in my home”应为“at my home”，表示地点。动词“like”后应接动名词形式“going”，而非不定式。