朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. 'Which' ko sato 'whom' ya 'that' prayog garnu ramro huncha. Aba, uttar lai 3-4 vaakya samma simit rakhnu parcha ra anawasyak shabda haru hataunu parcha.

範例: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known for many years. She is very kind and always helps me with my studies and playing games. I really appreciate her support in many activities.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma awasyak chhaina bhane 'umm' jasta filler shabda haru hataunu parcha. Pratyek vaakya spashta ra prabhavit hunu parcha. Thap vivaran dinu parcha jasto ki kun khel khelnu huncha ra kina.

範例: I usually play video games with my friend, but mostly we study together. For example, we help each other understand difficult subjects like math and science.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma 'to to' jasta galti haru chhanna parcha. 'Normal conversation and like that' jasto aspaṣṭa shabda haru ko sato thap vistrit ra spashta uttar dinu parcha.

範例: We often meet at our houses, but sometimes we go to cafes or restaurants to chat and enjoy meals together.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma 'go off and out' jasto galti haru chhanna parcha. Uttar lai thap prabhavit ra spashta banau, ra anawasyak punaravritti hataunu parcha.

範例: Yes, I often go out with my friends. I enjoy spending time with them because it is fun and relaxing.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma punaravritti ra galti haru chhanna parcha. Uttar lai spashta ra prabhavit banau ra thap vistrit karan dinu parcha.

範例: Friends are very important to me because they understand my feelings and always support me during difficult times.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma 'stuffs' jasto aspaṣṭa shabda haru chhanna parcha. Uttar lai thap spashta ra prabhavit banau ra punaravritti hataunu parcha.

範例: I enjoy spending time both with one friend and with a group. When I want privacy, I spend time with one friend, but for parties, I prefer going out with a group.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma punaravritti ra galti haru chhanna parcha. 'Invite my friends in my house' ko sato 'invite my friends to my house' bhannu ramro huncha. Uttar lai thap spashta ra prabhavit banau.

範例: Yes, I often invite my friends to my house because my mom likes them too. We usually spend time playing video games together.

× Yes, I do have a friend which I have known for a long time umm she's pretty good and she helps me a lot in my uh activities like studying, playing games and she helps me a lot of things.

✓ Yes, I do have a friend whom I have known for a long time. Umm, she's pretty good and she helps me a lot in my activities like studying, playing games, and she helps me with a lot of things.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for a person; 'whom' is the correct relative pronoun for people. Also, 'helps me a lot of things' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me with a lot of things' to properly use the preposition with 'help'.

× she helps me a lot of things.

✓ she helps me with a lot of things.

The verb 'help' requires the preposition 'with' when followed by a noun phrase indicating what is being helped with. Omitting 'with' leads to incorrect grammar.

× We often meet in our house, but sometimes in cafes and in restaurants to to do normal conversation and like that.

✓ We often meet at our house, but sometimes in cafes and restaurants to have normal conversations and things like that.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to meeting at a house; 'at' is the correct preposition. Also, 'to do normal conversation' is unnatural; 'to have normal conversations' is the correct collocation.

× Yes, I do go off and out with my friends a lot and it's pretty nice because I love going out with my friends.

✓ Yes, I do go out with my friends a lot and it's pretty nice because I love going out with my friends.

The phrase 'go off and out' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go out'. 'Go off' has a different meaning and is not appropriate here.

× Friends are like a part of my life and they are very important to me because they because they understand my feelings and and I do and they support me.

✓ Friends are like a part of my life and they are very important to me because they understand my feelings and they support me.

The sentence contains repeated words and unnecessary conjunctions which cause confusion. Removing the repeated 'because they' and 'and I do' clarifies the sentence. Also, 'friends' is plural and correctly matched with plural verbs.

× I like to spend time with my friend and her group of friends both because when I need some privacy I only go with one friend and when I do a lot of parties and stuffs I go out with a group of friends.

✓ I like to spend time with my friend and her group of friends both because when I need some privacy I only go with one friend and when I attend a lot of parties and stuff I go out with a group of friends.

The phrase 'do a lot of parties' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'attend' or 'go to' parties. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect as 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form.

× Yes, I often invite my friends to my home because because my mom also likes my friend and we spend a lot of time playing games, video games in my house. Yes, I invite my friends in my house.

✓ Yes, I often invite my friends to my home because my mom also likes my friend and we spend a lot of time playing video games in my house. Yes, I invite my friends to my house.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'invite'; the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating the place where someone is invited. Also, 'video games' should be preceded by 'playing' directly without a comma.