朋友— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Используйте правильные времена и избегайте лишних деталей, которые не связаны с вопросом. Например, не стоит упоминать, что друг похож на панду без объяснения. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности.

範例: Yes, I have a friend whom I've known since 2016. His name is Kendrick, and he is very kind and respectful. We have shared many good memories together.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Следует отвечать более ясно, использовать связующие слова и избегать повторов. Также стоит конкретизировать, что именно вы делаете с друзьями.

範例: Usually, we like to hang out and have fun together. Sometimes we get into trouble because my friend Kendrick is very energetic and restless.

建議: Ответ прерван и содержит ошибки. Нужно завершить мысль, использовать правильные предлоги и связующие слова для логичности. Также стоит дать более конкретное описание места встречи.

範例: We are a group of six friends who live close to each other. I live on the left side of Asana, so we usually meet near our school, which is convenient for all of us.

建議: Ответ содержит повторы и незавершённые мысли. Следует использовать связующие слова, избегать повторов и завершать предложения. Также стоит более чётко объяснить причины изменения привычек.

範例: Currently, I don't go out with my friends very often. However, a year ago, we used to hang out almost every day from morning till evening. Now, we focus more on our studies and future plans.

建議: Ответ содержит повторы и незавершённые предложения. Следует говорить более связно, использовать разнообразную лексику и завершать мысли. Также можно добавить причины, почему друзья важны.

範例: Honestly, my friends are very important to me, especially my closest ones. I consider them second only to my family because they support me and share my interests.

建議: Ответ содержит повторы и нечеткости. Следует говорить более уверенно, использовать связующие слова и избегать заполнителей речи. Также стоит структурировать ответ чётко.

範例: It depends on my mood. Usually, I prefer spending time with a group of friends, but sometimes I enjoy one-on-one conversations with a close friend.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Следует использовать правильные времена, избегать повторов и завершать мысли. Также стоит объяснить, почему дом неудобен.

範例: Definitely, I have invited my friends to my home for birthday parties and sleepovers. However, I don't like spending too much time at home because it's not very comfortable for gatherings.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и незавершённые мысли. Следует использовать правильные времена, связующие слова и завершать предложения. Также стоит более чётко сформулировать ответ.

範例: I don't think there is a significant difference. When we were children, we always met near our school, and even now, we still meet in similar places.

建議: Ответ содержит много заполнителей речи и незавершённые мысли. Следует говорить более уверенно, использовать связующие слова и завершать предложения. Также стоит привести конкретные примеры.

範例: I think some places are not suitable for meetings because they are too noisy or crowded, which makes it hard to have important conversations comfortably.

× I have a friend that I know for a long time.

✓ I have a friend that I have known for a long time.

The sentence describes a situation that started in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have known' is required instead of simple present 'know'. This tense correctly expresses the duration of the friendship.

× His name is Kendrick and I know him since 2016.

✓ His name is Kendrick and I have known him since 2016.

The phrase 'since 2016' indicates an action that started in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have known' should be used instead of simple present 'know'.

× Yes, he's very kind and respectful person and he looks like a panda.

✓ Yes, he's a very kind and respectful person and he looks like a panda.

The noun 'person' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Usually we get into trouble with with our friends because.

✓ Usually we get into trouble with our friends because.

The phrase contains a repeated preposition 'with with', which is incorrect. Only one 'with' is needed.

× Of Kentrick, he doesn't know how to stay at one place for a long time.

✓ Kendrick doesn't know how to stay in one place for a long time.

The phrase 'Of Kentrick, he' is incorrect and redundant. Also, the preposition 'at' should be 'in' when referring to staying in a place.

× He have to do something, have to break something.

✓ He has to do something, has to break something.

The subject 'He' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'.

× So usually we get into troubles with.

✓ So usually we get into trouble.

The noun 'trouble' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'troubles' in this context.

× So we have a group of 6 people and all of us we live quite close to each other but I live on the left side of Asana so usually we meet up at near to our school.

✓ We have a group of six people, and all of us live quite close to each other. I live on the left side of Asana, so we usually meet near our school.

The original sentence is run-on and contains redundant phrases like 'all of us we'. Also, 'at near to' is incorrect; 'near' alone is sufficient. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So I.

✓ (Sentence incomplete; no correction possible.)

The sentence fragment 'So I.' lacks a verb and is incomplete, so it cannot be corrected without additional context.

× Right now, not that often but but a year ago we used to hang out almost every day from morning till the from morning to evening and but right now we all have to focus on our future.

✓ Right now, not that often, but a year ago we used to hang out almost every day from morning to evening. But right now, we all have to focus on our future.

The sentence contains repeated conjunctions 'but but' and awkward phrasing. It is corrected by removing duplicates and splitting into clearer sentences.

× So we study and we try to avoid.

✓ So we study and try to avoid distractions.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'try to avoid' without an object. Adding 'distractions' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Honestly my my friends are very important to me, especially the best ones.

✓ Honestly, my friends are very important to me, especially the best ones.

The repeated word 'my' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'my'.

× I think I put them on 2nd place after my family and they're very good people and very.

✓ I think I put them in second place after my family, and they're very good people.

The phrase 'put them on 2nd place' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' for 'in second place'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and is corrected for completeness.

× I think it depends on my mood, but usually I prefer to spend time with a group of friends, but sometimes I spend time uh only with the like 2 or one peop one friend so we can talk to each other.

✓ I think it depends on my mood, but usually I prefer to spend time with a group of friends. Sometimes I spend time only with one or two friends so we can talk to each other.

The sentence contains filler words and unclear phrasing like 'the like 2 or one peop one friend'. It is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Definitely yes and I already had had invited them on my birthday on a sleepovers and but I don't like to spend time at home because it's not convenient.

✓ Definitely yes, and I have already invited them to my birthday sleepovers, but I don't like to spend time at home because it's not convenient.

The phrase 'had had invited' is incorrect; the present perfect 'have invited' is appropriate here. Also, 'on a sleepovers' is incorrect; it should be 'to my birthday sleepovers'. The conjunction 'and but' is redundant and corrected.

× I think there are no significant differences because we used to in childhood, we used to meet always near to our school and but right now I think nothing have changed.

✓ I think there are no significant differences because in childhood, we always used to meet near our school, and right now I think nothing has changed.

The phrase 'used to in childhood' is awkward; 'in childhood, we used to' is correct. Also, 'near to' should be 'near'. The verb 'have changed' should be 'has changed' to agree with singular subject 'nothing'.

× So we used to do.

✓ (Sentence incomplete; no correction possible.)

The sentence fragment 'So we used to do.' is incomplete and lacks context to provide a correction.

× I think, uh, some places are not very suitable for, uh, important topics to talk, uh, because, uh, in some places there are a huge amount of people inside, so it's, uh, not comfortable to talk And, uh, it's this, this.

✓ I think some places are not very suitable for talking about important topics because there are a huge number of people inside, so it's not comfortable to talk.

The phrase 'suitable for important topics to talk' is incorrect; it should be 'suitable for talking about important topics'. Also, 'a huge amount of people' is incorrect; 'a huge number of people' is correct for countable nouns. The sentence is cleaned up for clarity and grammar.