网站— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid vague terms like 'educational Staffs'. Also, try to connect your ideas more logically and avoid mixing unrelated examples. Be more specific about the types of websites you visit.

範例: I often visit websites related to business and education. For example, I frequently search for educational articles and business news on Google.

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'like'. Also, be more concise and clear in your description. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about the website's content.

範例: My favorite website is www.estella.com, which focuses on improving business skills. It offers useful tips on customer cooperation and business development.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid filler words and be specific about the changes you notice. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I have noticed some changes recently. For instance, the product designs and pricing layouts on the websites have become more complex, which makes it harder to navigate.

建議: Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

範例: In my country, websites related to online business and shopping are very popular because many people prefer to buy products online for convenience.

× I often visit a website that are related to business and it could be related to educational Staffs.

✓ I often visit websites that are related to business and they could be related to educational staff.

The subject 'a website' is singular but followed by the plural verb 'are', causing a singular and plural mismatch. Also, 'Staffs' is incorrect as 'staff' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The sentence is corrected by making 'website' plural to 'websites' to match the plural verb 'are' and changing 'Staffs' to 'staff'.

× I often visit a website that are related to business and it could be related to educational Staffs.

✓ I often visit a website that is related to business and it could be related to educational staff.

The relative clause refers to 'a website' which is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'are' with a singular subject, which is a third person singular verb agreement error.

× My favorite website would be, uh, business related website, which is called www.estella.com.

✓ My favorite website would be, uh, a business-related website, which is called www.estella.com.

The phrase 'business related website' is missing an article before 'business-related website'. Adding 'a' clarifies that it is one website. Also, 'business related' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective.

× It's a, uh, web website based on, uh, business skills, like how to improve in your business skills and how to cooperate with your customers like that.

✓ It's a website based on business skills, like how to improve your business skills and how to cooperate with your customers.

The phrase 'web website' is redundant; 'website' alone suffices. Also, 'improve in your business skills' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'improve your business skills'. The phrase 'like that' is unnecessary and informal here.

× Yes uh, I find it quite changed nowadays umm, I can see changes on the website uh basically on the products design and the price designs it's showing is too difficult.

✓ Yes, uh, I find it quite changed nowadays. Umm, I can see changes on the website, basically in the product design, and the price designs it shows are too complicated.

The phrase 'I find it quite changed' is awkward; 'changed' is a past participle and does not fit well with 'find'. Also, 'products design' should be 'product design' (singular as a general concept). 'Price designs it's showing is too difficult' has subject-verb agreement errors and awkward phrasing; corrected to 'price designs it shows are too complicated'.

× I can see changes on the website uh basically on the products design and the price designs it's showing is too difficult.

✓ I can see changes on the website, basically in the product design, and the price designs it shows are too complicated.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'product design'; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate aspects within the website. Also, 'price designs it's showing' is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× In my country, I'll say the websites that are related to umm, online business or online shopping.

✓ In my country, I'll say the websites that are related to online business or online shopping.

No plural issue here; sentence is correct in this part.

× Those are quite popular in my country because online shopping is quite very widely used in my country.

✓ Those are quite popular in my country because online shopping is very widely used in my country.

The phrase 'quite very widely' is redundant and incorrect; 'quite' and 'very' should not be used together before 'widely'. Choosing one adverb 'very' improves clarity and correctness.