网站— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise, fix grammar and redundancy, and provide one or two specific examples and reasons. Use a clear topic sentence then a supporting detail with linking words. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I mostly visit social media sites such as Instagram and Facebook because I use them to keep up with friends and trends. For example, I follow hobby groups and pages that share photography tips, which helps me relax and learn new ideas. I rarely use the Internet for work or research, so social platforms are my main online habit.

建議: Good clear answer with specific reasons. Improve by correcting minor grammar (remove duplicate 'and'), add one concrete example of content you read and use a linking word to connect ideas for coherence.

範例: My favourite website is BBC News because it offers reliable, up-to-date coverage and in-depth analysis. For example, I regularly read their politics and science sections to understand current events and new research, which helps me discuss topics confidently. In addition, I appreciate the clear, neutral writing style.

建議: Answer is vague and contains grammar and word-choice errors. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific examples of changes (layout, features) and explain why they matter using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'personalities fees'.

範例: Yes. Many websites often change their layout and add new features to improve usability. For example, news sites now include customizable sections and easier navigation bars, which help me find articles faster. These updates make browsing more efficient and keep the site feeling modern.

建議: Clear and relevant answer with specific categories. Improve by adding a concrete example of a popular site or a statistic and use a linking word to connect the growth of ecommerce to reasons why it increased.

範例: Social media platforms like Facebook and news websites are the most popular, because people use them daily to stay connected and informed. In addition, e-commerce sites such as local online marketplaces have grown rapidly, since online shopping is convenient and often offers lower prices and fast delivery.

× I prefer to use the Internet for larger and relaxation.

✓ I prefer to use the Internet for leisure and relaxation.

The original uses 'larger' which is incorrect here; likely intended 'leisure'. This is a word choice / sentence structure issue that makes the meaning unclear. Replace 'larger' with 'leisure' to convey recreational use; 'leisure and relaxation' is redundant so you could use just 'leisure' or 'relaxation' to be concise.

× So the kinds of website use most often are social media websites.

✓ So the kinds of websites I use most often are social media websites.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' and has 'website' singular where plural 'websites' is required. This is a sentence structure and subject-verb relationship issue. Add the subject 'I' and use the plural noun 'websites' to match 'kinds of' and 'most often'.

× My favorite website is BBC News because it provides reliable, updated coverage of world events and in-depth analysis.

✓ My favorite website is BBC News because it provides reliable, up-to-date coverage of world events and in-depth analysis.

'Updated' as an adjective is incorrect in this context; the standard compound adjective is 'up-to-date' meaning regularly refreshed. Use the hyphenated form before a noun: 'up-to-date coverage'.

× I often read its articles to stay informed about politics and and the science and appreciate the clear writing.

✓ I often read its articles to stay informed about politics and science and appreciate the clear writing.

There is a duplicated conjunction 'and and' causing an error. Remove the extra 'and'. Also 'the science' should be 'science' (no article) when speaking generally.

× Yes, I do notice changes on the website with regular, especially in layout and functionality as many sites update their design to improve user experience.

✓ Yes, I do notice changes on websites regularly, especially in layout and functionality, as many sites update their design to improve user experience.

Several issues: 'on the website' is too specific; 'on websites' or 'to websites' is better. 'with regular' is incorrect; use the adverb 'regularly'. Also add commas for clarity. Changed singular to plural 'websites' to match general statement.

× For example, news websites often add new sections or personalities fees which makes it easy to find articles.

✓ For example, news websites often add new sections or personalize features, which makes it easier to find articles.

The phrase 'personalities fees' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'personalized features' or 'personalisation features'. Also insert a comma before 'which' and change 'makes it easy' to 'makes it easier' for smoother comparative phrasing.

× In my country, social media platforms and news websites are the most popular as people use them daily to stay connected and informed.

✓ In my country, social media platforms and news websites are the most popular because people use them daily to stay connected and informed.

Using 'as' meaning 'because' is acceptable but can sound formal or ambiguous; replacing with 'because' clarifies the causal relationship. This is a style/article/word-choice improvement rather than strict grammar error.

× Additionally, ecommerce sites have grown rapidly because online shopping is convenient and often offers better price and delivery options.

✓ Additionally, e-commerce sites have grown rapidly because online shopping is convenient and often offers better prices and delivery options.

'ecommerce' should be hyphenated or written 'e-commerce'. 'better price' should be plural 'better prices' when speaking generally. These are adjective/noun form issues.