挑战— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains redundancy. Try to organise your ideas more clearly, avoid repeating phrases, and use correct grammar. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: I found physics and mathematics the most challenging subjects at school because they involved complex concepts and numerous calculations. For example, understanding formulas and applying them to solve problems was difficult. Additionally, memorising theories required a lot of effort. Overall, these subjects demanded both logical thinking and memorisation skills.

建議: Your answer shows your opinion clearly but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, explain how challenges help you develop skills with specific examples.

範例: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself because I believe that taking risks helps me grow. For instance, facing difficult situations improves my problem-solving skills and encourages me to think critically. Without challenges, life would be less meaningful and less exciting.

建議: Your answer is somewhat negative and lacks coherence. Try to express your opinion more clearly and balance your ideas by explaining both the difficulties and possible benefits of challenges. Use linking words to connect your points logically and avoid repetition.

範例: Living a life full of challenges can be exhausting because it may cause stress and mistakes. However, facing difficulties also helps people grow stronger and learn from their failures. Therefore, although challenges can be tough, they are important for personal development.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organise your ideas logically, use correct grammar, and complete your sentences. Provide specific strategies you use to handle challenges and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: When I face challenges in daily life, I usually try to communicate with others to ask for help if I don't understand something. Additionally, I think about different aspects of the problem to find the best solution. This approach helps me manage difficulties more effectively.

× I believe that physics and mathematics were really difficult during school time because we had to memorize them and we had to calculate lots of numbers and formal and memorize them, and the concept of this subject were really difficult to learn it on that.

✓ I believe that physics and mathematics were really difficult during school time because we had to memorize them and calculate lots of numbers and formulas, and the concepts of these subjects were really difficult to learn.

The sentence contains singular and plural issues: 'concept of this subject were' should be 'concepts of these subjects were' to agree in number. Also, 'formal' is likely a typo for 'formulas'. The correction ensures subject-verb agreement and correct plural forms.

× Yes, since I'm a risk taker I prefer to take a risk because I believe that without risk and challenges our life don't doesn't have a mean and it will be meaningless.

✓ Yes, since I'm a risk taker I prefer to take risks because I believe that without risk and challenges our life doesn't have a meaning and it will be meaningless.

The modal verb 'doesn't' is correct for singular subject 'life', but 'don't doesn't' is incorrect; only 'doesn't' should be used. Also, 'a mean' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'a meaning'. The correction fixes modal verb usage and noun choice.

× So I prefer to have challenge to improves my solving problems skills and also critic I can think critical.

✓ So I prefer to have challenges to improve my problem-solving skills and also to think critically.

'Challenge' should be plural 'challenges' to match the context. 'Improves' should be 'improve' to agree with 'to have challenges'. 'Solving problems skills' is better expressed as 'problem-solving skills'. 'Critic I can think critical' is incorrect; it should be 'to think critically'.

× Life will have lots of challenges, will be horrifying and make lots of troubles because people get exhausted and they cannot concentrate, lots of duties and challenges.

✓ Life will have lots of challenges, will be horrifying and cause lots of trouble because people get exhausted and cannot concentrate due to many duties and challenges.

'Make lots of troubles' is incorrect; 'cause lots of trouble' is the correct phrase. 'Lots of troubles' should be 'lots of trouble' as 'trouble' is uncountable here. The correction addresses plural and uncountable noun usage.

× They may have lots of error, mistakes, failures, so they feel frustration and they get disappointed.

✓ They may have lots of errors, mistakes, and failures, so they feel frustrated and get disappointed.

'Lots of error' should be 'lots of errors' to be plural. 'Feel frustration' should be 'feel frustrated' to use the correct adjective form. The correction fixes plural noun and adjective usage.

× We have sometimes challenges and we learn how to deal with, for instance, we have to have a communication skills to ask for others help where we don't know about these issues and challenge.

✓ We sometimes have challenges and we learn how to deal with them. For instance, we need communication skills to ask others for help when we don't know about these issues and challenges.

'We have sometimes challenges' is better as 'We sometimes have challenges'. 'Deal with' requires an object, so 'deal with them' is needed. 'A communication skills' is incorrect; 'communication skills' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Ask for others help' should be 'ask others for help'. The correction fixes preposition and article usage.

× And I sometimes think about different aspects of challenge to resolve it and it's really.

✓ I sometimes think about different aspects of a challenge to resolve it, and it's really helpful.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'a' before 'challenge' and completing the sentence with 'helpful' improves structure and meaning.