挑战— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'mathematic' ควรเป็น 'mathematics' และคำบางคำไม่เหมาะสมหรือไม่ชัดเจน เช่น 'enrollment' และ 'Achieva' ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น นอกจากนี้ ควรจัดระเบียบคำตอบให้มีความชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกันด้วยคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม

範例: I think mathematics is the most challenging subject at school for many students because it requires logical thinking, problem-solving skills, and consistent practice. For example, topics like algebra and calculus can be quite difficult to understand.

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'go and learn new skill' ควรเป็น 'to learn new skills' และ 'kept me motivation and forecast' ไม่ชัดเจน ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและมีความหมายชัดเจน

範例: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself because it helps me learn new skills. For example, I often set personal goals like learning a new language or improving my fitness, which keeps me motivated and focused. Challenges also boost my confidence and make me feel accomplished.

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ไม่ถูกต้องหรือไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'Forgot different advantage variable lessons' และ 'build vaccination' ซึ่งไม่สื่อความหมายที่ชัดเจน ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่าย

範例: Yes, I enjoy living a life full of challenges because they push me to improve myself. Facing different difficulties teaches me valuable lessons and helps me build resilience. For example, overcoming tough situations makes me more confident and adaptable.

建議: คำตอบของคุณมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'begging the problem down' ควรเป็น 'breaking the problem down' และ 'competing them' ควรเป็น 'completing them' นอกจากนี้ ควรใช้คำเชื่อมและประโยคที่ชัดเจนเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความสมบูรณ์และเข้าใจง่าย

範例: I usually deal with challenges by staying calm and breaking the problem down into smaller, manageable parts. For example, if I have a tight deadline at work, I focus on completing each task step by step. This approach helps me handle challenges effectively and finish on time.

× I believe mathematic is the most challenging subject at school for many students.

✓ I believe mathematics is the most challenging subject at school for many students.

The word 'mathematic' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'mathematics', which is singular and uncountable. This is a singular and plural issue because the subject name must be in its correct form.

× This is because the enrollment, problem solving, skill and concept that they call logic, thinking and practicing.

✓ This is because of the enrollment, problem solving skills, and concepts such as logic, thinking, and practicing.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and connectors. 'Enrollment' needs a preposition 'of', 'skill' should be plural 'skills', and the sentence needs to be restructured for clarity.

× For example topic like Achieva and calculus.

✓ For example, topics like Algebra and calculus.

'Topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'like'. Also, 'Achieva' seems to be a misspelling of 'Algebra'.

× Yes, I do enjoy challenging myself because it's helped me go and learn new skill.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy challenging myself because it has helped me go and learn new skills.

The phrase 'it's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity, and 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context.

× For example, I often said personal goal like learning a new language or improve my fitness which kept me motivation and forecast.

✓ For example, I often set personal goals like learning a new language or improving my fitness which keep me motivated and focused.

'Said' is incorrect; it should be 'set'. 'Goal' should be plural 'goals'. 'Improve' should be 'improving' to match the gerund form. 'Motivation' should be 'motivated' (adjective), and 'forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'focused'.

× Challenge also brought my confidence and make me feel a combination.

✓ Challenges also boost my confidence and make me feel accomplished.

'Challenge' should be plural 'Challenges'. 'Brought' is past tense; 'boost' fits better in present tense. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject or 'make' with plural. 'Combination' is incorrect; 'accomplished' or 'fulfilled' fits better.

× Yes, I do enjoy living our lives with challenge because they push me to go and improve.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy living our lives with challenges because they push me to go and improve.

'Challenge' should be plural 'challenges' to match 'they'.

× Forgot different advantage variable lessons and help me build vaccination.

✓ I have learned different valuable lessons and they help me build resilience.

'Forgot' is incorrect; 'I have learned' fits better. 'Advantage variable' is incorrect; 'valuable' is appropriate. 'Vaccination' is incorrect; 'resilience' fits the context.

× For example overcoming absolute advert make me more confident and adapted.

✓ For example, overcoming absolute adversity makes me more confident and adaptable.

'Advert' is incorrect; 'adversity' is correct. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject. 'Adapted' should be 'adaptable' (adjective).

× I usually deal with challenges in the real life but start staying calm and begging the problem down into smaller managed part.

✓ I usually deal with challenges in real life by staying calm and breaking the problem down into smaller manageable parts.

'Start staying calm' is incorrect; 'by staying calm' is correct. 'Begging' should be 'breaking'. 'Managed part' should be 'manageable parts'.

× For example, if I have a tight deadline at work, I take and focus on competing them step by step.

✓ For example, if I have a tight deadline at work, I take it and focus on completing them step by step.

'Competing' is incorrect; 'completing' is correct. 'Take and focus on' is awkward; 'take it and focus on' is better.

× This approach help merely deal straight and finally.

✓ This approach helps me deal with them directly and finally.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Merely deal straight and finally' is awkward; 'deal with them directly and finally' is clearer.