挑战— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。より自然で明確な表現を使い、具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。

範例: I think English is the most challenging subject at school because it has many difficult words and grammar rules. For example, I often struggle with verb tenses and vocabulary, which makes learning English hard for me.

建議: 答えは質問に合っていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。より簡潔で自然な英語を使い、具体的な経験を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself. For example, when I played soccer in high school, I faced many difficulties, but I felt proud when I overcame them.

建議: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や意見を具体的に述べる練習が必要です。文法と語彙の改善も重要です。

範例: Yes, I prefer a life with challenges because they help me grow. Although a life without hardships might be comfortable, facing difficulties makes life more meaningful.

建議: 答えは質問に合っていますが、文法や語彙の誤りがあり、表現が不自然です。より自然な表現を使い、具体的な方法や感情を詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I usually talk about my challenges with my friends because it's hard to face them alone. Their support and advice help me overcome difficulties in daily life.

× As the Japanese people, their English is very difficult for us to learn a lot of things like words or grammars.

✓ As Japanese people, English is very difficult for us to learn many things like words or grammar.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'their' which is unnecessary and confusing here. Also, 'grammars' should be singular 'grammar' as it is an uncountable noun. 'As the Japanese people' is better expressed as 'As Japanese people' without 'the'.

× So I always challenge it to learn a lot of glamorous.

✓ So I always challenge myself to learn a lot of grammar.

The word 'glamorous' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'grammar'. Also, 'challenge it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'challenge myself'.

× and there are a lot of hardships for myself, but it was comfortable for me to overcome the challenges.

✓ and there were a lot of hardships for me, but it was comfortable for me to overcome the challenges.

The sentence refers to past events, so 'are' should be changed to past tense 'were'. Also, 'for myself' is incorrect; 'for me' is appropriate here.

× So I like to overcome the challenges myself.

✓ So I like to overcome the challenges myself.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× Yes, I like that having a life that is there are no hardships is that is good for us.

✓ Yes, I like that having a life with no hardships is good for us.

The phrase 'that is there are no hardships is that is good for us' is grammatically incorrect and redundant. It should be simplified to 'having a life with no hardships is good for us.'

× But I think it is more important to having busy days because.

✓ But I think it is more important to have busy days because.

The verb after 'important to' should be in the base form 'have', not the gerund 'having'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be completed for clarity.

× As many as we overcome the hardships, we.

✓ The more hardships we overcome, the stronger we become.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. A proper comparative structure is needed to express the intended meaning.

× I always talk with the challenges with my friends.

✓ I always talk about the challenges with my friends.

The correct preposition to use with 'talk' in this context is 'about', not 'with'.

× It is very hard for me to allocate those challenges along.

✓ It is very hard for me to face those challenges alone.

'Allocate' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'face' or 'deal with'. Also, 'along' should be 'alone' to mean 'by myself'.

× But I have many friends that are very kind to me, so their existence always support me to tackle the challenges.

✓ But I have many friends who are very kind to me, so their existence always supports me in tackling the challenges.

'That' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'Support' should be 'supports' to agree with singular subject 'existence'. Also, 'support me to tackle' is better expressed as 'supports me in tackling'.