挑战— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thap sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le 'I feel math is' bhanda 'I felt that math was' jasto past tense ma bolnu parcha. Arko kura, tapai le answer lai thap spashta ra sangathit banau, jasma linking words jastai 'because' ya 'therefore' prayog garnu parcha.

範例: When I was at school, I felt that math was the most challenging subject because it involved many calculations and rules that I had to memorize. Since I am not good at memorizing, I found it difficult to keep up with the lessons.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra grammar ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'Is really' jasto incomplete sentence haru hataunu parcha. Tapai le answer lai thap vivid ra logical banau, linking words jastai 'because' ya 'so' prayog garnu parcha.

範例: Yes, I really love to challenge myself because it helps me grow and stay focused on my tasks. Recently, I challenged myself by running every day for more than 30 days, which was very hard but rewarding.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'a life of full of life' jasto phrase haru hataunu parcha. Tapai le answer lai thap specific ra logical banau, linking words prayog garnu parcha.

範例: Yes, definitely. I like to live a life full of challenges because it brings me joy and motivates me to be dedicated to my work. For example, recently I challenged myself to learn a new skill, which was difficult but fulfilling.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra clarity ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'addressing the addressing them by a beautiful solution' jasto phrase haru hataunu parcha. Tapai le answer lai thap specific ra logical banau, linking words jastai 'therefore' ya 'so' prayog garnu parcha.

範例: I usually deal with challenges in daily life by finding effective solutions. This approach helps me stay creative and dedicated to my tasks, which contributes to my personal and professional growth.

× When I I was at school, I feel math is really challenging subject.

✓ When I was at school, I felt math was a really challenging subject.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the time frame is in the past ('When I was at school'), the verbs should also be in the past tense ('felt' instead of 'feel', 'was' instead of 'is').

× It has a loss of calculations, rules and regulations which I have to memorize and I am really weak in memorizing.

✓ It has a lot of calculations, rules, and regulations which I have to memorize and I am really weak at memorizing.

The phrase 'a loss of' is incorrect here; the correct quantifier is 'a lot of' to indicate many calculations. Also, 'weak in memorizing' should be 'weak at memorizing' to use the correct preposition.

× So I feel math is.

✓ So I feel math is challenging.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement after 'is'. Adding 'challenging' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Is really.

✓ It really is.

The sentence fragment 'Is really.' lacks a subject. Adding 'It' as the subject completes the sentence.

× I really love challenge myself, it helps me grow and focus on the tasks.

✓ I really love to challenge myself; it helps me grow and focus on the tasks.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to challenge' rather than the bare verb 'challenge'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and should be separated properly.

× Recently I challenged myself doing hard work on running after uh more than a 30 day of.

✓ Recently, I challenged myself by working hard on running for more than 30 days.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'by' before 'working hard' and restructuring the phrase clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I love to live a life of full of life, full of challenges.

✓ I love to live a life full of life, full of challenges.

The phrase 'a life of full of life' is incorrect; 'of' should be removed to correctly say 'a life full of life'.

× Recently I had a had challenged myself in.

✓ Recently, I challenged myself.

The phrase 'had a had challenged' is redundant and incorrect. Using simple past 'challenged' is sufficient here. The sentence is also incomplete, so it is shortened to a complete thought.

× I deal with several challenges daily life by addressing the addressing them by a beautiful solution.

✓ I deal with several challenges in daily life by addressing them with effective solutions.

The phrase 'challenges daily life' needs the preposition 'in' to be correct. Also, 'addressing the addressing them by a beautiful solution' is repetitive and awkward; 'addressing them with effective solutions' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It helps me to make a more creative and still dedicated towards the tax and help me grow professionally and personally.

✓ It helps me to be more creative and stay dedicated to the tasks, and it helps me grow professionally and personally.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and unclear meaning ('make a more creative', 'still dedicated towards the tax'). Correcting to 'be more creative', 'stay dedicated to the tasks' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.