挑战— Part 1 評分報告

建議: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और शब्दों का सही उपयोग करना आवश्यक है। 'a lots of' की जगह 'a lot of' होना चाहिए और 'This make' की जगह 'This makes'। इसके अलावा, उत्तर को थोड़ा और प्राकृतिक और प्रवाहपूर्ण बनाने के लिए कुछ लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

範例: I find history to be the most challenging subject at school because it requires remembering a lot of dates, empires, and important battles. Moreover, it can be difficult to keep track of when different events happened and how they are connected. This makes it hard for me to understand the overall story and remember all the details.

建議: आपके उत्तर में 'moves my confidence' गलत है, इसे 'improves my confidence' या 'boosts my confidence' कहना चाहिए। इसके अलावा, 'a complete or difficult task' की जगह 'complete a difficult task' कहना बेहतर होगा। उत्तर को और अधिक स्वाभाविक बनाने के लिए छोटे सुधार करें।

範例: Yes, I really enjoy challenging myself because it boosts my confidence and helps me concentrate better on my work. Taking on new challenges gives me opportunities to grow both personally and professionally, which is very rewarding. For example, when I try to learn a new skill or complete a difficult task, I feel more motivated and focused.

建議: आपका उत्तर अच्छा है लेकिन 'smooth and peaceful moments' की जगह 'calm and peaceful moments' कहना अधिक प्राकृतिक होगा। साथ ही, उत्तर में थोड़ा और विस्तार और लिंकिंग शब्द जोड़कर इसे और प्रभावी बनाया जा सकता है।

範例: I prefer to live a balanced life with some challenges. For instance, I enjoyed the challenges at my workplace because they helped me improve my skills and boost my confidence. However, I also believe that life should not be too difficult all the time, so I like to have some calm and peaceful moments as well.

建議: आपका उत्तर बहुत अच्छा है। हालांकि, आप कुछ और लिंकिंग शब्द जैसे 'therefore' या 'as a result' का उपयोग कर सकते हैं ताकि उत्तर और अधिक प्रवाहपूर्ण हो।

範例: I usually stay calm and positive whenever I face a difficult situation in my daily life. As a result, this attitude helps me think clearly and find effective solutions without getting stressed. For example, when I have a tight deadline, staying calm allows me to manage my time better and complete my work on time.

× I find history to be challenging subject at school because it involves remembering a lots of dates, empires and important battles.

✓ I find history to be a challenging subject at school because it involves remembering a lot of dates, empires and important battles.

यहाँ 'a lots of' गलत है क्योंकि 'lots' बहुवचन है और 'a' एकवचन के साथ उपयोग नहीं होता। सही रूप 'a lot of' है जो मात्रा दर्शाता है। साथ ही 'challenging subject' से पहले 'a' लगाना आवश्यक है क्योंकि 'subject' एकवचन है। This sentence has two errors: 'a lots of' is incorrect because 'lots' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The correct phrase is 'a lot of' to indicate quantity. Also, 'challenging subject' needs the article 'a' before it because 'subject' is singular.

× This make it hard for me to understand the oral story and remember all the details.

✓ This makes it hard for me to understand the oral story and remember all the details.

यहाँ 'make' का प्रयोग गलत है क्योंकि 'This' एकवचन है, इसलिए क्रिया भी एकवचन 'makes' होनी चाहिए। The verb 'make' is incorrect here because the subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'makes' to agree with the subject.

× Yes, I really enjoy challenging myself because it moves my confidence and helps me concentrate better on my work.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy challenging myself because it boosts my confidence and helps me concentrate better on my work.

यहाँ 'moves my confidence' गलत है क्योंकि 'move' का अर्थ यहाँ उपयुक्त नहीं है। सही क्रिया 'boosts' है जो 'confidence' बढ़ाने के लिए उपयोग होती है। The phrase 'moves my confidence' is incorrect because 'move' does not fit the context. The correct verb is 'boosts' which means to increase confidence.

× For example, when I try to learn a new skill or a complete or difficult task, I feel more motivated and focused.

✓ For example, when I try to learn a new skill or complete a difficult task, I feel more motivated and focused.

यहाँ 'a complete or difficult task' गलत है क्योंकि 'complete' और 'difficult' दोनों विशेषण हैं और 'or' का उपयोग गलत है। सही वाक्य में 'complete a difficult task' होना चाहिए। The phrase 'a complete or difficult task' is incorrect because 'complete' and 'difficult' are adjectives and 'or' is misused. The correct phrase is 'complete a difficult task'.