挑战— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và lặp lại. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích cụ thể lý do tại sao môn toán khó với bạn, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu nối để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I find math the most challenging subject at school because I struggle with calculations. For example, when I face difficult exercises, I often cannot find the correct answers easily.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa cho ý kiến của bạn.

範例: Yes, I like to challenge myself because it helps me improve. For instance, facing challenges allows me to gain valuable experience that I can apply in real life.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích rõ ràng quan điểm của bạn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I don't prefer a life full of challenges because it can be stressful. However, I am willing to face challenges when they help me gain experience for my career.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn giải quyết vấn đề để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

範例: First, I stay calm to think clearly. Then, I try my best to solve the problem. If I can't find a good solution, I ask for advice from my parents or mentor.

× I think the most challenging subject that I have at school is math, uh, to be honest that I'm not really good at calculating, so that when I have some hard ex exercise, I cannot overcome and, uh, find the answer very well.

✓ I think the most challenging subject that I have at school is math, uh, to be honest, I'm not really good at calculations, so when I have some hard exercises, I cannot overcome them and, uh, find the answers very well.

The word 'calculating' should be 'calculations' because it refers to the noun form of the activity. 'Ex exercise' is incorrect; it should be 'exercises' in plural form to match 'some hard'. Also, 'answer' should be plural 'answers' to agree with 'exercises'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I think the most challenging subject that I have at school is math, uh, to be honest that I'm not really good at calculating, so that when I have some hard ex exercise, I cannot overcome and, uh, find the answer very well.

✓ I think the most challenging subject that I have at school is math, uh, to be honest, I'm not really good at calculations, so when I have some hard exercises, I cannot overcome them and, uh, find the answers very well.

The phrase 'so that when' is incorrect here; it should be 'so when' to correctly connect the clauses. 'So that' is used to express purpose, but here the meaning is cause and effect, so 'so' is appropriate.

× Yes, of course, I really want to challenge myself to find my best of my version and besides that I have been more challenges help me to gain the experience for my real life and I can learn from that.

✓ Yes, of course, I really want to challenge myself to find the best version of myself and besides that, more challenges help me to gain experience for my real life and I can learn from that.

The phrase 'my best of my version' is incorrect; it should be 'the best version of myself'. Also, 'I have been more challenges' is incorrect; it should be 'more challenges help me'. The quantifier 'more' is used correctly but the sentence structure is wrong. 'Gain the experience' should be 'gain experience' because 'experience' is uncountable here.

× Yes, of course, I really want to challenge myself to find my best of my version and besides that I have been more challenges help me to gain the experience for my real life and I can learn from that.

✓ Yes, of course, I really want to challenge myself to find the best version of myself and besides that, more challenges help me to gain experience for my real life and I can learn from that.

The conjunction 'and besides that' should be followed by a comma to separate the clauses properly. Also, the sentence structure needs adjustment to improve clarity.

× Uh, not really because I don't really like my whole life on the challenges, but when I need to, uh, have more experience to, to gain for my job, I would like to have the challenges, but when I get older, I prefer.

✓ Uh, not really because I don't really like my whole life to be full of challenges, but when I need to gain more experience for my job, I would like to have challenges, but when I get older, I prefer not to.

The phrase 'my whole life on the challenges' is incorrect; it should be 'my whole life to be full of challenges'. Also, 'have more experience to, to gain for my job' is awkward; it should be 'gain more experience for my job'. 'I would like to have the challenges' should be 'I would like to have challenges' without 'the'. The last part 'but when I get older, I prefer' is incomplete and needs 'not to' to complete the meaning.

× Uh, not really because I don't really like my whole life on the challenges, but when I need to, uh, have more experience to, to gain for my job, I would like to have the challenges, but when I get older, I prefer.

✓ Uh, not really because I don't really like my whole life to be full of challenges, but when I need to gain more experience for my job, I would like to have challenges, but when I get older, I prefer not to.

The sentence is fragmented and incomplete. The last clause 'but when I get older, I prefer' lacks an object or complement. Adding 'not to' completes the thought. Also, restructuring the sentence improves clarity and flow.

× First of all, I will stay calm and after that I will try my best to address their challenges and when I cannot have the best solution, I will I will ask some advice from my parents or my mentor too.

✓ First of all, I will stay calm and after that I will try my best to address the challenges and when I cannot find the best solution, I will ask for some advice from my parents or my mentor too.

The phrase 'address their challenges' is unclear; it should be 'address the challenges'. Also, 'cannot have the best solution' is incorrect; it should be 'cannot find the best solution'. The phrase 'ask some advice' is incorrect; it should be 'ask for some advice' because 'ask' requires the preposition 'for' when requesting advice.