假期— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'places' thay vì 'place', 'Bến Thành Market' thay vì 'Benton Markets', và 'spot' thay vì 'sport'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

範例: Last summer, I went to Ho Chi Minh City with my family. We traveled by plane and visited many interesting places. For example, Ben Thanh Market is a famous and lively spot where you can buy local food and souvenirs.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lỗi như 'help me you want'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ số nhiều 'markets' và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy holidays because they give me a chance to relax and spend quality time outdoors. For example, I often go hiking or visit local markets with my family and friends, which helps me unwind and create happy memories.

建議: Câu trả lời cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'summer holidays back' không rõ nghĩa, nên sửa thành 'summer holidays best'. Câu cuối nên hoàn chỉnh hơn, ví dụ 'Also, the warm water makes it a perfect time to spend.'

範例: Well, I think I enjoy summer holidays best because when summer comes, I usually go to the beach with my family. I love playing in the sand and building sandcastles, which is very relaxing and fun. Also, the warm water makes it a perfect time to spend.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh, câu cuối bị bỏ dở 'It's.'. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ phù hợp như 'exercise' không cần 'do' trước nó.

範例: Actually, I usually do more activities during holidays. For example, in the morning, I often exercise to improve my health, and in the evening, I usually go to the cinema with my friends to relax and enjoy new movies.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý số nhiều khi nói 'museums' và 'acting workshops'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể thêm liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

範例: To be honest, I prefer spending my time outdoors rather than staying at home because when I go out, I can learn new things and develop my skills. For example, I often visit museums or acting workshops with my friends.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'allow' nên là 'allows', 'rechange' nên là 'recharge'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

範例: I prefer a leisurely holiday rather than a busy one because it allows me to relax and recharge my mind after working hard. For example, I enjoy spending time reading books or listening to music.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý số nhiều 'quiet places' và dùng từ chính xác hơn 'public city' nên là 'busy city'. Câu trả lời có thể mạch lạc hơn với liên từ.

範例: I would prefer a peaceful holiday because I find it relaxing to spend time in quiet places away from the busy city. For example, I enjoy going to the countryside or the beach.

× we visited many interesting place

✓ we visited many interesting places

The noun 'place' should be plural 'places' because it refers to multiple locations visited during the trip.

× Benton Markets is a famous and lively sport where you can buy local food and souvenir

✓ Benton Markets is a famous and lively spot where you can buy local food and souvenirs

The word 'sport' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'spot' meaning a place. Also, 'souvenir' should be plural 'souvenirs' because it refers to multiple items.

× I often go hiking or visit local market with my family and friends

✓ I often go hiking or visit local markets with my family and friends

The noun 'market' should be plural 'markets' to indicate visiting more than one market.

× which help me you want and create a happy memory

✓ which helps me relax and create happy memories

The phrase 'help me you want' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'helps me relax' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'memory' should be plural 'memories'.

× I think I enjoy summer holidays back because when summer comes I usually go to the beach with my family

✓ I think I enjoy summer holidays best because when summer comes I usually go to the beach with my family

The word 'back' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'best' to express preference.

× Also the warm water making it a perfect time to spend

✓ Also, the warm water makes it a perfect time to spend

The sentence lacks a verb; 'making' should be changed to 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'water'.

× Actually, I usually do more activities during holidays

✓ Actually, I usually do more activities during the holidays

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'holidays' to specify the time period.

× I often do exercise to improve my health

✓ I often do exercises to improve my health

The noun 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' when referring to physical activities in general.

× It's.

✓ It's relaxing and enjoyable.

The sentence 'It's.' is incomplete and lacks meaning; it should be completed to express the intended idea.

× I often visit museum or acting workshop with my friends

✓ I often visit museums or acting workshops with my friends

The nouns 'museum' and 'acting workshop' should be plural to indicate multiple visits.

× it allow me to relax and rechange my mind after working hard

✓ it allows me to relax and recharge my mind after working hard

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'rechange' is incorrect; the correct word is 'recharge'.