植物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide one or two supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: No, I don't keep plants at home because I lack the knowledge to care for them properly. However, my mom enjoys gardening and takes good care of her plants.

建議: Avoid filler words and hesitations to make your answer sound more fluent. Begin with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to add specific details about the plant's appearance and size.

範例: I don't remember the name of the plant I grew as a child, but it was a small green plant with yellow flowers. It never grew very big, which made it easy to care for.

建議: Reduce hesitations and filler words to improve fluency. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples of your knowledge to make your answer more effective.

範例: I have some basic knowledge about plant care, such as the type of soil and watering needs in different seasons, because I studied science. However, I haven't had much practical experience growing plants.

建議: Avoid excessive hesitations and unclear phrases. Start with a clear statement and then provide your opinion with reasons or examples to make your answer more coherent and confident.

範例: I'm not entirely sure if Chinese people commonly give plants as gifts, but I think it would be a thoughtful choice because plants symbolize growth and good luck.

× No, actually I don't keep them at home because I do not have knowledge and information required to grow them at home.

✓ No, actually I don't keep plants at home because I do not have the knowledge and information required to grow them at home.

The pronoun 'them' is used correctly to refer to plants, but the sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'knowledge and information'. Adding 'the' specifies the particular knowledge and information needed, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And even another thing is I don't know how to take care, but my mom actually does.

✓ And another thing is I don't know how to take care of them, but my mom actually does.

The phrase 'how to take care' is incomplete without the preposition 'of' and the object 'them' to specify what is being taken care of. Adding 'of them' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× But not uh, I'm not really into that.

✓ But no, I'm not really into that.

The phrase 'But not uh' is awkward and unclear. Replacing it with 'But no' provides a clearer and grammatically correct negation.

× What plant did you grow when you were young?

✓ What plant did you grow when you were young?

This sentence is a question from the examiner and is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× To be very honest, I uh, don't remember, uh, uh, the name of that plant, but I can tell you the appearance, how it looks like it was small green plant with the yellow flowers and uh, uh, I would say it, it never grow too big.

✓ To be very honest, I don't remember the name of that plant, but I can tell you about its appearance. It was a small green plant with yellow flowers, and I would say it never grew too big.

The sentence had redundant fillers and incorrect verb tense 'grow' instead of 'grew'. Also, 'how it looks like' is incorrect; 'about its appearance' is clearer. Removing fillers and correcting verb tense improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Uh, that's only thing I know.

✓ That's the only thing I know.

The sentence is in present tense and is acceptable; however, adding the definite article 'the' before 'only thing' is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× I have just a little bit information about that, like what kind of soil they need and how much quantity of water in every season they need because I come from, uh, the, uh, science, uh, you know, field.

✓ I have just a little bit of information about that, like what kind of soil they need and how much water they need in every season because I come from the science field.

The phrase 'a little bit information' is incorrect; it should be 'a little bit of information'. Also, 'how much quantity of water' is redundant; 'how much water' suffices. Removing unnecessary fillers and correcting quantifiers improves grammatical correctness.

× So I know the little bit biology from that.

✓ So I know a little bit of biology from that.

The phrase 'the little bit biology' is incorrect; it should be 'a little bit of biology' to indicate an unspecified small amount.

× Apart from that, I never tried, uh, practically.

✓ Apart from that, I have never tried it practically.

The sentence lacks the object 'it' and the present perfect tense 'have never tried' is more appropriate to indicate experience up to now.

× Uh, to be very honest, I'm not Hunter especially sure about that, whether they, uh, use plants as a gift or not, but, uh, I would, uh, imagine that if it, it is a good option if they choose it.

✓ To be very honest, I'm not particularly sure about that, whether they use plants as gifts or not, but I would imagine that it is a good option if they choose it.

The phrase 'Hunter especially sure' is incorrect; it should be 'particularly sure'. Also, 'plants as a gift' should be plural 'plants as gifts' to match plural 'plants'. Removing fillers and correcting pronouns improves clarity and grammar.