植物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答自然且内容相关，但句子结构较简单，且缺少连接词使表达更连贯。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑性，并丰富词汇表达。

範例: Yes, I keep a couple of small green plants on my balcony because they brighten up the room and help me relax when I'm studying or working.

建議: 回答中有重复表达（watered and wetted），且缺少连接词，句子略显零散。建议避免重复，使用连接词如“and”或“so”，并丰富细节描述。

範例: When I was young, I grew plants in primary school for a science project, and I was excited to check them every morning to see if they had grown taller.

建議: 回答内容基本完整，但多次使用“but”显得重复，建议使用多样的连接词如“however”或“although”，并尝试更具体描述所观察到的种植方法。

範例: I know the basics, such as plants need good soil, enough water, and sunlight; however, I don't have much experience myself, but I often watch my grandparents who are very interested in growing plants.

建議: 回答中出现了矛盾表达（"sounds a bit strange"与"we really do that"），且句子结构不够清晰。建议避免自相矛盾，使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: In China, people usually send plants as gifts when someone moves to a new house or opens a new business; for example, lucky bamboo is a popular present because it symbolizes good luck and steady growth.

× Helps me relax.

✓ It helps me relax.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。应加上主语“it”使句子完整。

× I watered them and wetted them to sprout.

✓ I watered them and waited for them to sprout.

“wetted”用法错误，正确表达应为“waited for them to sprout”，表示等待发芽。

× I was excited checking them every morning to see if they grew taller.

✓ I was excited to check them every morning to see if they grew taller.

“excited checking”结构不正确，应使用不定式“to check”表示目的。

× I just watch them doing that.

✓ I just watch them do that.

动词“watch”后接动词时应使用动词原形，不用动名词形式。

× In China we really do that unless someone moves to a new house or opens a new business.

✓ In China we really don't do that unless someone moves to a new house or opens a new business.

句中缺少否定词“not”，导致意思与实际相反，应加上“don't”。