植物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和不完整的句子。可以用简单句表达喜好和原因。

範例: No, I don't keep plants at home because they usually wilt quickly. However, I do like flowers and sometimes buy bouquets to enjoy for a few days.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题，使用正确时态和词汇，补充具体细节。

範例: I didn't grow any plants when I was young, but my father planted pear trees in our garden when we lived in a detached house.

建議: 回答较为简单且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议用完整句子表达自己的知识来源，并举例说明。

範例: I know a little about growing plants because my mother used to plant many flowers and fruit trees like pears and peaches in our yard when I was a child.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和冠词，句子更自然连贯。

範例: Yes, Chinese people often send plants or flowers as gifts. For instance, I might send flowers to a friend who has just bought a new house or to a teacher who is retiring to express my good wishes.

× My flowers always reserved within a week so I never planned them at my home.

✓ My flowers always get reserved within a week so I never plant them at my home.

这里的 'flowers' 是复数，动词需要与之匹配。原句中缺少助动词 'get'，且 'planned' 应为 'plant'，因为这里指的是种植花。

× I remember that once I bought a very beautiful bunch of flowers and.

✓ I remember that once I bought a very beautiful bunch of flowers.

句子末尾的 'and' 是多余的，导致句子不完整。应去掉 'and' 使句子完整。

× Actually, I never grow any plants when I was young, but my father always did did it.

✓ Actually, I never grew any plants when I was young, but my father always did it.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态，'grow' 应改为 'grew'。另外，'did did it' 是重复，应改为 'did it'。

× For example, one was little.

✓ For example, when I was little.

原句中 'one was little' 语义不清，应该是 'when I was little'，表示“当我小时候”。

× My family good, umm, planted, uh, peers.

✓ My family planted pears.

'peers' 是错误拼写，应为 'pears'（梨子）。另外，'My family good' 语法不完整，应去掉 'good'。

× All of my planting knowledge was from my father because she planted a lot of flowers and fruit trees in our yard.

✓ All of my planting knowledge was from my father because he planted a lot of flowers and fruit trees in our yard.

'father' 是男性，代词应使用 'he' 而不是 'she'。

× She planted pears, Peaches.

✓ She planted pears and peaches.

'Peaches' 不应大写，且应加连词 'and' 连接两个名词。

× Yes, for example when one of my friend buy a new house, I could send her flowers to express my blessing.

✓ Yes, for example when one of my friends buys a new house, I can send her flowers to express my blessing.

'friend' 应为复数 'friends'，因为 'one of' 后面接复数名词。'buy' 应改为第三人称单数 'buys'。'could' 改为 'can' 更符合表达习惯。

× Or when my teacher retired I could send her a flowers.

✓ Or when my teacher retired, I could send her flowers.

'a flowers' 中 'flowers' 是复数，不应加不定冠词 'a'。应去掉 'a'。