颜色— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คำตอบของคุณควรเป็นประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ เช่น ใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดขัดหรือแยกประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและมีความหมายครบถ้วน

範例: My favorite color is blue because it makes me feel relaxed and calm. For example, when I look at the clear blue sky, I feel happy and peaceful.

建議: ควรตอบเป็นประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น ใช้ "because" ตามด้วยเหตุผลที่ชัดเจน และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดแยกประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

範例: I don't strongly dislike any color, but if I had to choose, I would say purple because it is difficult to match with other colors and often clashes with them.

建議: ควรตอบโดยใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงกัน ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผล และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดขัดหรือแยกประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

範例: I am not sure about all my friends, but one of my friends seems to like black and white because he often wears a plain black T-shirt with white shorts and sandals.

建議: ควรตอบเป็นประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น อธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดขัดหรือแยกประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

範例: I would say purple makes me uncomfortable in my room. Recently, my family bought a new house, and the purple color in my room does not match well with the other colors, so it feels unpleasant.

× I really like blue because. Is. Make me feel relief.

✓ I really like blue because it makes me feel relieved.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a subject and verb in the second and third parts. 'Is' is incomplete and 'Make me feel relief' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes me feel relieved' to form a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× Especially when I look at the sky.

✓ Especially when I look at the sky, I feel happy and calm.

The original sentence is a fragment and does not form a complete thought. Adding the main clause 'I feel happy and calm' completes the sentence.

× I can feel that.

✓ I can feel that happiness and calmness.

The sentence is vague and incomplete. Adding what is felt clarifies the meaning.

× I am so happy and calm.

✓ I feel so happy and calm.

Using 'feel' is more appropriate to express emotions in this context.

× Because. Is really hard to match purple with other color.

✓ Because it is really hard to match purple with other colors.

The sentence is fragmented and missing a subject. 'Is' should be 'it is' and 'color' should be plural 'colors' to agree with 'other'.

× Is often cash with something else.

✓ It often clashes with something else.

'Is' should be 'It' as the subject, and 'cash' is a typo; the correct word is 'clash'.

× I have no idea what my friends love most but I would say my friend mean he likes black and white because he always wear plain black T-shirt with white shorts.

✓ I have no idea what my friends like most, but I would say my friend means he likes black and white because he always wears plain black T-shirts with white shorts.

'Mean' should be 'means' to agree with singular subject 'friend'. 'Wear' should be 'wears' for third person singular. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'always wears' and general usage.

× In a sandals so I guess that what he likes.

✓ He wears sandals, so I guess that is what he likes.

'In a sandals' is incorrect; it should be 'He wears sandals'. Also, 'that what he likes' needs 'is' to be grammatically correct.

× So recently. We, my family just bought a new house.

✓ So recently, my family and I just bought a new house.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. 'We, my family' is incorrect; it should be 'my family and I'.

× An the color that is not match with any other hello is purple.

✓ And the color that does not match with any other color is purple.

'An' should be 'And'. 'Is not match' is incorrect; it should be 'does not match'. 'Hello' is a typo and should be 'color'.

× So maybe purple is not calling it with any other colors.

✓ So maybe purple does not go well with any other colors.

'Is not calling it' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'does not go well with' to indicate incompatibility.