颜色— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I like all shades of pink' instead of 'every shades of pink'. Also, avoid generalisations like 'pink is more girly color'; instead, explain why you like it personally. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: My favourite colour is pink because it feels warm and cheerful. I like all shades of pink, from soft pastel to bright fuchsia, as they brighten my mood and suit my style.

建議: Avoid unnecessary words like 'Mike' which do not relate to the question. Use correct grammar such as 'colours' instead of 'color' when plural. Also, link your ideas clearly and explain your reasons more specifically.

範例: I dislike orange and mustard yellow because they are too bright and harsh for my eyes. Therefore, I avoid wearing clothes in these colours, although I don't mind seeing others wear them.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'and' to connect ideas. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and be specific about your friends' preferences.

範例: One of my friends likes blue the most because it is a peaceful and calming colour. Another friend prefers red since she enjoys bright and energetic colours.

建議: Use singular or plural forms correctly, for example, 'darker shades make me uncomfortable'. Also, combine short sentences using linking words to improve fluency and coherence.

範例: Dark colours like black and other dark shades make me uncomfortable in my room because they feel heavy and irritating to my eyes. Therefore, I prefer brighter and lighter colours that create a cheerful atmosphere.

× I like every shades of pink.

✓ I like every shade of pink.

The word 'every' is used with singular countable nouns, so 'shades' should be singular 'shade' here to be grammatically correct.

× I think pink is more girly color and it looks always beautiful on girls.

✓ I think pink is a more girly color and it always looks beautiful on girls.

The phrase 'more girly color' needs an article 'a' before 'more' because 'color' is singular countable noun. Also, 'looks always beautiful' is incorrect word order; 'always' should come before the verb 'looks'.

× I don't like orange and mustard yellow color much.

✓ I don't like orange and mustard yellow colors much.

When referring to more than one color, the plural form 'colors' should be used instead of singular 'color'.

× I think it irritates my eyes and make me uncomfortable.

✓ I think it irritates my eyes and makes me uncomfortable.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I personally don't like to wear. Those clothes on myself, but I love to see them on others.

✓ I personally don't like to wear those clothes on myself, but I love to see them on others.

The period after 'wear' incorrectly breaks the sentence. It should be one continuous sentence for clarity and correctness.

× Friends, like most.

✓ My friends like certain colors the most.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'My friends like certain colors the most' makes it a complete and meaningful sentence.

× My 1 friend low blue color the most.

✓ My one friend likes blue color the most.

The word 'low' is incorrect; it should be 'likes'. Also, '1' should be written as 'one' in formal speech. 'Blue color' is acceptable but 'the color blue' is more natural.

× Uh, I think she. Things that it is a very peaceful color.

✓ Uh, I think she thinks that it is a very peaceful color.

The sentence is broken and incomplete. 'She. Things' is incorrect; it should be 'she thinks' to form a proper sentence.

× It is soothing to our eyes and a calm color.

✓ It is soothing to the eyes and a calm color.

Using 'our eyes' is less natural here; 'the eyes' is more appropriate when speaking generally.

× My other friend Lowe's red color because she loves bright colors I think.

✓ My other friend likes red color because she loves bright colors, I think.

'Lowe's' is a misspelling of 'likes'. Also, a comma is needed before 'I think' for correct punctuation.

× Well, black and the other darker shades makes me uncomfortable in my room.

✓ Well, black and the other darker shades make me uncomfortable in my room.

The subject 'black and the other darker shades' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'.

× I think it is. Very irritating to my eyes.

✓ I think it is very irritating to my eyes.

The period after 'is' incorrectly breaks the sentence. It should be one continuous sentence for clarity and correctness.