颜色— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer ektu bistarito korun ebong proshner shathe shothik bhabe jogajog korun. Apnar favorite colour keno seta bolun ebong ekadik colour bola theke birat thakun.

範例: My favorite colour is black because it looks elegant and matches with everything. I also like white as it gives a clean and fresh feeling.

建議: Apni proshner uttor e specific details den ebong linking words babohar korun. Ekadik colour dislike korar karon bistarito bolun ebong sentence gulo logical bhabe jukto korun.

範例: I dislike purple and blue because they are dark colours and make me feel gloomy. Moreover, I prefer brighter colours that uplift my mood.

建議: Apnar uttor e grammar shothik korun ebong proshner shathe shothik bhabe jogajog korun. Ekadik friend er colour preference bolte paren ebong linking words babohar korun.

範例: Most of my friends like white because it looks clean and bright. For example, my best friend always wears white clothes as it suits him well.

建議: Apni proshner shothik uttor din. Proshno hocche kon colour apnar room e uncomfortable lage, kintu apni positive kotha bolchen. Apnar uttor e coherence rakhun ebong proshner shathe mil rekhen.

範例: Actually, I feel uncomfortable with dark colours like dark brown in my room because they make the room look smaller and gloomy.

× I dislike purple and blue because it is not my favorite colour.

✓ I dislike purple and blue because they are not my favorite colours.

The subject 'purple and blue' is plural, so the verb and pronoun should also be plural. 'It is' should be 'they are' and 'colour' should be plural 'colours' to agree with the plural subject.

× My friend most like colour is white.

✓ My friend's most liked colour is white.

The phrase needs possessive form 'friend's' and the verb 'like' should be in past participle 'liked' to correctly describe the noun 'colour'. Also, 'most like colour' is incorrect; it should be 'most liked colour'.

× His uh it it his favorite color.

✓ It is his favorite color.

The sentence contains redundant pronouns 'His uh it it his'. It should be simplified to 'It is his favorite color' for clarity and correctness.

× He always used this color.

✓ He always uses this color.

The adverb 'always' indicates a habitual action in the present, so the verb should be in present tense 'uses' instead of past tense 'used'.

× My room comfortable makes this color white.

✓ The color that makes my room comfortable is white.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and structure. It should be rearranged to clearly express that white is the color that makes the room comfortable.

× I use this color on my room.

✓ I use this color in my room.

The correct preposition to indicate location inside a room is 'in', not 'on'.