颜色— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly state your favorite color and explain clearly why you like it, avoiding unclear words like 'canali'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: My favorite color is yellow because it reminds me of spring. For example, yellow flowers bloom during this season, which makes me feel happy and refreshed.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question about a disliked color. Try to clearly state the color you dislike and give a specific reason. Avoid unrelated details and incomplete sentences.

範例: I dislike white color because it easily gets dirty and stained. For instance, when I wear a white shirt, it is hard to keep it clean.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct sentence structures and explain clearly why your friends like pink, using linking words to connect ideas.

範例: My friends like pink because it represents a princess. When they see pink, they feel happy and excited.

建議: Your answer is quite clear but can be improved by using better vocabulary and linking words. Try to explain more specifically how red affects you and why you avoid it.

範例: The color red in my room makes me uncomfortable because it stimulates my eyes and makes me feel tired quickly. Therefore, I avoid using red in my room's decoration.

× My favorite color is yellow because when I see this color it reminds me of spring, especially I think canali which means spring flowers so I thought.

✓ My favorite color is yellow because when I see this color, it reminds me of spring, especially I think of canali which means spring flowers, so I thought.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'of' after 'think' which is necessary to connect the verb to its object. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity. The phrase 'I think canali' should be 'I think of canali'. Adding commas improves sentence flow and understanding.

× In my case I dislike height colors because if I wear white color shirt then it easy to get bleached from other dirty things.

✓ In my case, I dislike bright colors because if I wear a white shirt, then it is easy to get bleached by other dirty things.

The word 'height' is incorrect; it should be 'bright' to describe colors. Also, 'white color shirt' is awkward; 'a white shirt' is correct. The verb 'it easy' lacks 'is' for correct verb agreement. Preposition 'from' should be 'by' to indicate the agent causing bleaching. Commas improve readability.

× Well, my friends like pink because pink color means Princess so when she see the color, her feeling uh, become a great and delighted so that's why.

✓ Well, my friends like pink because pink color means princess, so when she sees the color, her feelings become great and delighted. That's why.

The verb 'see' should be 'sees' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context. 'Become a great and delighted' is incorrect; it should be 'become great and delighted' without 'a'. Commas and sentence breaks improve clarity.

× When I see red color in my room, this color stimulate my eye so I feel easily tired when I see the color.

✓ When I see red color in my room, this color stimulates my eyes, so I feel easily tired when I see the color.

The verb 'stimulate' should be 'stimulates' to agree with singular subject 'this color'. 'Eye' should be plural 'eyes' as humans have two eyes. Comma before 'so' improves sentence structure.