礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use clearer expressions. For example, instead of 'my love language is to give gifts to my loved ones', you can say 'I express my affection through gift-giving'.

範例: Yes, I believe I am good at giving gifts because I express my affection through gift-giving, and it makes me happy to see my loved ones pleased.

建議: Your answer covers the question well but is a bit long and repetitive. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. Also, correct minor grammar errors like 'becauses' to 'because'.

範例: I usually give gifts to my close ones on their birthdays or special occasions because it's a kind gesture, and seeing their smiles makes me very happy.

建議: Your answer has good content but contains a confusing phrase 'pleasant pregnancy' which seems incorrect. Be careful with word choice and try to use relevant vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

範例: When choosing a gift, I usually prefer giving perfume to my close friends and family because it is a thoughtful and personal present. Additionally, perfume is practical since people can use it daily, making it meaningful.

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'the thing she like I made that like pizza Boo chocolate'.

範例: Yes, I once gave my best friend a handmade soft clay mirror. I designed it with small clay items she likes, such as pizza and chocolate shapes, and she really appreciated it.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes. Focus on expressing your opinion clearly and use simple, correct sentences. Avoid confusing phrases and ensure your ideas are logically connected.

範例: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. What matters is the thought behind the gift, not its price. I feel happy whenever someone gives me a gift, regardless of how much it costs.

× my love language is to give gifts to my loved ones

✓ my love language is giving gifts to my loved ones

The phrase 'love language is to give gifts' is incorrect because 'love language' is typically followed by a gerund form to describe the action. Using 'giving gifts' is the correct form here.

× I feel very good after giving my love a gift

✓ I feel very good after giving a gift to my loved ones

The phrase 'giving my love a gift' is ambiguous and incorrect. It should be 'giving a gift to my loved ones' to clearly indicate the recipients of the gift.

× Usually I give gifts to my close ones when it's their birthday or special occasion becauses giving gift is a good gesture

✓ Usually I give gifts to my close ones when it's their birthday or a special occasion because giving gifts is a good gesture

The phrase 'special occasion' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. 'Giving gift' should be plural 'giving gifts' to match the context.

× becauses giving gift is a good gesture

✓ because giving gifts is a good gesture

The noun 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to the general act of giving gifts, not a single gift.

× seeing smiles after receiving the gift makes my day and I feel very good after giving them gifts

✓ seeing smiles after receiving gifts makes my day and I feel very good after giving them gifts

The phrase 'the gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match the context of multiple gifts being given and received.

× I usually prefer giving perfume to my close friends and family because this is a thoughtful and personal present, and I enjoy the pleasant pregnancy it offers

✓ I usually prefer giving perfume to my close friends and family because it is a thoughtful and personal present, and I enjoy the pleasant fragrance it offers

The word 'pregnancy' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'fragrance' which relates to perfume. Also, 'this is' is better replaced with 'it is' for clarity.

× Yes, I have given a hand made gift to my best friend and it was a soft clay mirror

✓ Yes, I have given a handmade gift to my best friend, and it was a soft clay mirror

The word 'hand made' should be combined as 'handmade' as it is a compound adjective describing the gift.

× I designed it and the thing she like I made that like pizza Boo chocolate

✓ I designed it and made things she likes, such as pizza, Boo, and chocolate

The sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'The thing she like I made that like pizza Boo chocolate' is confusing. It should be rephrased to 'made things she likes, such as pizza, Boo, and chocolate' to clarify meaning and correct verb agreement.

× I've made items with that clay and stick it into the mirror and she liked it very much

✓ I've made items with that clay and stuck them onto the mirror, and she liked it very much

The verb 'stick' should be in past tense 'stuck' to match the past action. Also, 'stick it into the mirror' is incorrect; 'stuck them onto the mirror' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× No, I don't think so. Only expensive gives better express my feelings becauses gift

✓ No, I don't think so. Only expensive gifts better express my feelings because gifts

The word 'gives' should be plural 'gifts' to match the subject. Also, 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction.

× Only expensive gives better express my feelings becauses gift

✓ Only expensive gifts better express my feelings because gifts

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be restructured to 'Only expensive gifts better express my feelings because gifts' or better yet, 'Only expensive gifts better express my feelings because gifts are precious' for clarity.

× Is precious and I don't personally see a price of a gift

✓ They are precious, and I don't personally consider the price of a gift

The sentence lacks a subject and is fragmented. 'Is precious' should be 'They are precious' referring to gifts. Also, 'see a price' is incorrect; 'consider the price' is the correct phrase.

× Whenever I receive a gift, I am very happy that someone has to can afford to give to me something

✓ Whenever I receive a gift, I am very happy that someone can afford to give me something

The phrase 'has to can afford' is incorrect; 'can afford' is sufficient. Also, 'give to me something' should be 'give me something' as 'give' is a ditransitive verb that takes an indirect object without 'to'.