礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is quite detailed but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I consider myself good at giving gifts because I always think carefully about the recipient's personality and preferences. Therefore, most people ask me for advice when choosing presents.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by avoiding vague phrases like 'quite nice' or 'quite positive'. Also, try to keep sentences concise and avoid unnecessary repetition.

範例: Most people give gifts on birthdays, but I prefer to give gifts spontaneously whenever I feel happy. This way, the gift feels more personal and meaningful.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete at the end. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'as previously mentioned' in speaking.

範例: When choosing a gift, I think about the recipient's personality and how they might react. Although it's important that they appreciate the gift, I believe the main point is to show your care and thoughtfulness.

建議: Your answer has good content but is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to use varied sentence structures, avoid repeating phrases like 'quite often', and ensure grammatical accuracy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I often gave handmade gifts when I was younger. For example, I made cards with sketches of the recipient and even crafted decorated hats with jewels for birthdays.

建議: Your answer expresses your opinion clearly but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and clearer linking words to express your ideas more naturally.

範例: I disagree because the value of a gift is not about its price. What matters more is the thought and effort behind it, so handmade gifts can express feelings just as well as expensive ones.

× I believe gift giving is quite an amazing characteristic that I have.

✓ I believe gift-giving is quite an amazing characteristic that I have.

The term 'gift giving' should be hyphenated to form a compound noun 'gift-giving' when used as a noun phrase. This clarifies that it is a single concept rather than a verb phrase.

× That's when I bring gifts for people on.

✓ That's when I bring gifts for people.

The preposition 'on' at the end of the sentence is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. Removing it makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I do feel the person you are giving the gift should be appreciative of your efforts, however, you still have to keep a positive outlook because gift is about.

✓ I do feel the person you are giving the gift to should be appreciative of your efforts; however, you still have to keep a positive outlook because gift-giving is about thoughtfulness.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'to' after 'giving the gift' to correctly link the verb to its object. Also, the sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity; adding 'gift-giving is about thoughtfulness' completes the thought. Additionally, 'gift' should be 'gift-giving' as a noun.

× Quite often actually, I when I was younger, I used to make the handmade cards with the sketches of the gift receiver drawn in my card.

✓ Quite often actually, when I was younger, I used to make handmade cards with sketches of the gift receiver drawn on my cards.

The phrase 'I when I was younger' contains an unnecessary 'I'. Also, 'the handmade cards' should be 'handmade cards' without 'the' for general reference. 'Drawn in my card' should be 'drawn on my cards' to correctly describe the location of the sketches.

× I used to make those handmade hats for birthdays with which had jewels attached on it.

✓ I used to make those handmade hats for birthdays which had jewels attached to them.

The phrase 'with which had jewels attached on it' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'which had jewels attached to them' to correctly use the relative pronoun and preposition, and to agree in number with 'hats'.

× I firmly disagree with this question because.

✓ I firmly disagree with this question because I believe gifts cannot be given a monetary value.

The sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. Adding a reason after 'because' completes the sentence and clarifies the speaker's opinion.

× I don't feel gifts can be given a monetary value or how the gift giver, gift giver, and the gift receiver would feel is definitely not correlating to the expense one has spent on the gift.

✓ I don't feel gifts can be given a monetary value, and how the gift giver and the gift receiver feel definitely does not correlate with the amount spent on the gift.

The sentence repeats 'gift giver' unnecessarily and has awkward phrasing. Correcting the pronoun usage and verb agreement improves clarity and grammatical correctness.