礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more direct and natural. For example, say "I don't think I'm very good at giving gifts because I often ask others for advice to choose a better gift." This makes your response clearer and more effective.

範例: I don't think I'm very good at giving gifts because I often ask others for advice to choose a better gift.

建議: Your answer covers the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, "I usually give gifts on special occasions such as weddings, ceremonies, and birthdays. For birthdays, I often give chocolates or money. At ceremonies, I once gave a bouquet of flowers to express my affection, and for weddings, I usually give money to wish the couple a prosperous future."

範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as weddings, ceremonies, and birthdays. For birthdays, I often give chocolates or money. At ceremonies, I once gave a bouquet of flowers to express my affection, and for weddings, I usually give money to wish the couple a prosperous future.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to organise your points clearly and use linking words. For example, "When choosing a gift, I consider that it is cost-effective and of good quality. Also, I prefer gifts that the recipient can use for a long time and that can help them in some way."

範例: When choosing a gift, I consider that it is cost-effective and of good quality. Also, I prefer gifts that the recipient can use for a long time and that can help them in some way.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Be clear and concise. For example, "No, I haven't given any handmade gifts except once when I gave a postcard to my friend on her birthday. However, I don't consider myself a good artist."

範例: No, I haven't given any handmade gifts except once when I gave a postcard to my friend on her birthday. However, I don't consider myself a good artist.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly. For example, "I don't think expensive gifts better express feelings. Instead, it's the thought and love behind the gift that truly matters."

範例: I don't think expensive gifts better express feelings. Instead, it's the thought and love behind the gift that truly matters.

× I usually have to take advice of a person to choose me a better gift.

✓ I usually have to take advice from a person to choose a better gift for myself.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used with 'advice'. The correct preposition is 'from' when indicating the source of advice. Also, 'choose me a better gift' is awkward; it should be 'choose a better gift for myself' to clarify the recipient.

× On birthday parties I usually give chocolates or money as a gift.

✓ On birthday parties, I usually give chocolates or money as gifts.

The phrase 'as a gift' is singular, but 'chocolates or money' implies multiple items, so 'gifts' (plural) is appropriate. Also, a comma after 'On birthday parties' improves clarity.

× On ceremony I gave a bouquet of lover representing my love and on a marriage ceremonies I usually gift them money for their better future.

✓ On a ceremony, I gave a bouquet of flowers representing my love, and on marriage ceremonies, I usually gift them money for their better future.

'On ceremony' should be 'On a ceremony' to indicate a specific event. 'Bouquet of lover' is incorrect; it should be 'bouquet of flowers'. 'Marriage ceremonies' is plural, so 'on marriage ceremonies' is correct without 'a'. Also, a comma before 'and' separates the two clauses.

× I usually consider that the gift is cost effective and is of better quality and a gift should be used by a person whole life to whom we are giving gift and gift to shoulder help the person in some way.

✓ I usually consider that the gift is cost-effective and of better quality, and a gift should be used by a person their whole life to whom we are giving the gift, and the gift should help the person in some way.

'Cost effective' should be hyphenated as 'cost-effective'. 'Used by a person whole life' is missing 'their' before 'whole life'. 'Giving gift' needs 'the' before 'gift'. 'Gift to shoulder help' is incorrect; it should be 'the gift should help'. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity.

× No, I haven't given any benefit gift to another person and once I had gave a postcard to my friend on her birthday.

✓ No, I haven't given any benefit gift to another person, and once I gave a postcard to my friend on her birthday.

The past perfect 'had gave' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'gave'. Also, a comma before 'and' separates the two clauses.

× But I think I'm not a good artist.

✓ But I think I'm not a good artist.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× I don't think so. Uh, feeling so light. Uh, the person's heart and the way by which they are giving gift to other a gift should express her love for the person who is given giving that gift.

✓ I don't think so. Uh, feelings are light. Uh, the person's heart and the way they give a gift to others should express their love for the person who is receiving that gift.

'Feeling so light' is unclear; 'feelings are light' is better. 'Giving gift to other a gift' is incorrect; it should be 'give a gift to others'. 'Her love' should be 'their love' to match 'they'. 'Who is given giving' is incorrect; it should be 'who is receiving'.