礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，使语言更流畅。

範例: Yes, I consider myself good at giving gifts because I always learn about my friends' interests beforehand. This helps me choose personalized presents that they truly appreciate, making the gifts meaningful and suitable.

建議: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I usually give gifts once or twice a year, mainly on birthdays and special occasions like Chinese New Year or graduations. Giving gifts on these days helps me show appreciation and strengthen our relationships.

建議: 表达中出现了不恰当的短语“put the salt into the gift”，建议使用更准确的表达；同时，句子结构可更简洁。

範例: I consider the recipient's interests when choosing a gift. For example, if she likes reading, I would pick a bestselling novel. This makes the gift both thoughtful and meaningful.

建議: 回答内容具体，但有语法错误（如“Web present this gift”），建议注意语法准确性并简化句子。

範例: Yes, I have given handmade gifts. Last year, I bought artificial flowers online and spent two weeks making a bouquet by following online videos. I gave it to my friend, and she was very touched by my effort.

建議: 回答内容丰富且表达清晰，但可适当使用连接词提升连贯性。

範例: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. A thoughtful gift that matches the recipient's preferences shows more care. For example, a handmade card or hobby-related item can be more meaningful than costly presents.

× I will learn about my friends interests and priorities in advance, which helps me to choose appropriate and personalized gift that they will truly appreciate.

✓ I will learn about my friends' interests and priorities in advance, which helps me to choose appropriate and personalized gifts that they will truly appreciate.

friends interests 中的 friends 应该是复数所有格，正确形式是 friends' interests；gift 应该用复数形式 gifts，因为指多个礼物。

× I can ensure the gifts can be meaningful and suitable for each person.

✓ I can ensure the gifts are meaningful and suitable for each person.

此句中 gifts 是复数，后面谓语动词应与复数主语一致，使用 are 而非 can be 更符合语境。

× I usually take the recipient's interest into account because it shows I put the salt into the gift.

✓ I usually take the recipient's interests into account because it shows I put the salt into the gift.

interest 应为复数 interests，因为一个人可能有多个兴趣爱好。

× I might choose a best selling novel for her.

✓ I might choose a best-selling novel for her.

best selling 应为复合形容词，需用连字符 best-selling。

× this gift will not only make the recipient feel happy, but also make this gift more meaningful and thoughtful.

✓ this gift will not only make the recipient feel happy, but also make it more meaningful and thoughtful.

避免重复使用 this gift，第二处用 it 代替更自然。

× Web present this gift to my friend.

✓ We presented this gift to my friend.

原句中 Web 应为 We，且时态应与上下文一致，使用过去式 presented。

× She was really touched by the effort and care I put in to make it.

✓ She was really touched by the effort and care I put into making it.

put in to 应为 put into，且后面动词应用动名词 making。

× handmade card or small items related to their hobbies can be far more meaningful and memorable than costly objects as it shows you truly understand and appreciate them.

✓ a handmade card or small items related to their hobbies can be far more meaningful and memorable than costly objects as they show you truly understand and appreciate them.

handmade card 前应加不定冠词 a；后半句主语为复数 items，谓语动词应用复数形式 show。