礼物— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you good at giving gifts?
考生
Yes I'm good giving gifts. I give gift to my friends and my family on special occasions like on my LA on last birthday I gifted my friend a new desktop watch which is about 15,000 because because he is not he did not have enough money to.
考官
When do you usually give gifts to others?
考生
I usually get there on special occasion like I get to my I get a watch to my friend on their birthday and also I get it a photo. I gifted a photo frame to my mother on their 15th anniversary.
考官
What do you consider when choosing a gift?
考生
When I choose a gift for other I consider the fact that the gift is more usable and under my budget because if I if I buy a thing which is more expensive and that thing was not in use of other person and that is loss of my money. So that's why I choose that if it is usable and under my.
考官
Have you ever given others a handmade gift?
考生
No, I don't even give other handmade gift because I'm not good in handicraft because I remember that when I'm in provider project to hand make bag and at that time I I got cut while.
考官
Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
考生
No expensive yet never express your feelings because beauty is just a formality for but when we.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you good at giving gifts?
分數: 55.0建議: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और वाक्य संरचना में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। उत्तर को अधिक स्पष्ट और संक्षिप्त बनाएं, और अनावश्यक पुनरावृत्ति से बचें। उदाहरण के लिए, उपयुक्त काल और वाक्य विन्यास का उपयोग करें।
範例: Yes, I am good at giving gifts. For example, on my friend's last birthday, I gifted him a desktop watch worth around 15,000 because he couldn't afford one.
When do you usually give gifts to others?
分數: 50.0建議: आपके उत्तर में वाक्य स्पष्ट नहीं हैं और कुछ वाक्य अधूरे हैं। अपने उत्तर को सरल और स्पष्ट वाक्यों में व्यक्त करें, और उपयुक्त लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।
範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions. For instance, I gave a watch to my friend on his birthday and a photo frame to my mother on her 15th anniversary.
What do you consider when choosing a gift?
分數: 60.0建議: आपके उत्तर में विचार स्पष्ट हैं, लेकिन वाक्य संरचना और व्याकरण में सुधार की आवश्यकता है। अपने विचारों को क्रमबद्ध और संक्षिप्त रूप में प्रस्तुत करें।
範例: When I choose a gift, I consider if it is useful and within my budget. I avoid expensive gifts that the person may not use, as that would be a waste of money.
Have you ever given others a handmade gift?
分數: 45.0建議: आपके उत्तर में वाक्य अधूरे हैं और विचार स्पष्ट नहीं हैं। अपने उत्तर को पूरा और स्पष्ट वाक्यों में व्यक्त करें, और अनुभव को विस्तार से बताएं।
範例: No, I have never given a handmade gift because I am not good at handicrafts. Once, during a project to make a handmade bag, I accidentally cut myself, so I prefer not to make handmade gifts.
Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
分數: 40.0建議: आपका उत्तर अधूरा और अस्पष्ट है। अपने विचारों को पूरी तरह से व्यक्त करें और स्पष्ट वाक्यों का उपयोग करें।
範例: No, expensive gifts do not necessarily express feelings better. I believe that the thought and effort behind a gift are more important than its price.
文法
× Yes I'm good giving gifts.
✓ Yes, I'm good at giving gifts.
यहाँ 'good at' के बाद verb का '-ing' form आना चाहिए। 'good giving' गलत है, सही रूप 'good at giving' होगा।
× I give gift to my friends and my family on special occasions like on my LA on last birthday I gifted my friend a new desktop watch which is about 15,000 because because he is not he did not have enough money to.
✓ I give gifts to my friends and my family on special occasions. For example, on my last birthday, I gifted my friend a new desktop watch which cost about 15,000 because he did not have enough money.
'gift' should be plural 'gifts' when referring generally. Also, sentence structure was confusing and needed separation for clarity.
× I usually get there on special occasion like I get to my I get a watch to my friend on their birthday and also I get it a photo.
✓ I usually give gifts on special occasions, like I gave a watch to my friend on their birthday and also a photo.
'get there' is incorrect here; 'give gifts' is appropriate. Also, 'on special occasion' should be 'on special occasions'.
× I gifted a photo frame to my mother on their 15th anniversary.
✓ I gifted a photo frame to my mother on her 15th anniversary.
'their' is plural pronoun; since mother is singular, 'her' should be used.
× When I choose a gift for other I consider the fact that the gift is more usable and under my budget because if I if I buy a thing which is more expensive and that thing was not in use of other person and that is loss of my money.
✓ When I choose a gift for others, I consider whether the gift is useful and within my budget because if I buy something expensive that the other person does not use, it is a waste of my money.
'other' should be 'others' to indicate plural. Also, 'more usable' is incorrect; 'useful' is better. 'in use of other person' is incorrect phrasing.
× No, I don't even give other handmade gift because I'm not good in handicraft because I remember that when I'm in provider project to hand make bag and at that time I I got cut while.
✓ No, I don't even give others handmade gifts because I'm not good at handicrafts. I remember when I was in a project to hand-make bags, and at that time I got cut.
'give other handmade gift' should be 'give others handmade gifts'. 'good in handicraft' should be 'good at handicrafts'. Also, tense correction and sentence completion needed.
× No expensive yet never express your feelings because beauty is just a formality for but when we.
✓ No, expensive gifts never express your feelings because beauty is just a formality.
Sentence was incomplete and unclear. 'yet never' is incorrect; 'never' alone suffices. 'expensive yet never express' is ungrammatical.
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