礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat long and slightly repetitive, which affects clarity. Try to make your response more concise and structured by stating your main idea clearly and then giving a brief explanation. Avoid redundancy such as 'make them happier and make them buy the things that they want'.

範例: I'm not very good at giving gifts because I usually prefer to give money so that people can buy what they really want. However, if I know someone well, I try to choose a more personal gift.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'and et cetera' and incomplete sentences.

範例: I usually give gifts on birthdays, but sometimes also on special holidays like International Women's Day on 8th March or Victory Day on 7th May. I don't usually give gifts on ordinary days.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, try to be more specific about how you choose gifts based on interests.

範例: When choosing a gift, I consider the person's interests. For instance, if they like flowers, I might give them roses or tulips, depending on their preferences.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical mistakes and informal expressions like 'Why?'. Try to give a clear and complete answer with proper grammar and avoid unnecessary questions within your response.

範例: Yes, when I was a child, I used to make handmade gifts for my parents because we couldn't afford to buy presents for occasions like birthdays.

建議: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Avoid vague phrases like 'or etcetera' and improve sentence structure. Provide a clear opinion with supporting reasons and examples.

範例: I don't believe expensive gifts express feelings better. Handmade gifts can be more meaningful because they show effort and thoughtfulness, regardless of cost.

× I prefer to give money in order to make them happier and make them buy the things that they want and but sometimes of course, if I know the person really closely.

✓ I prefer to give money in order to make them happier and make them buy the things that they want, but sometimes, of course, if I know the person really closely.

The conjunction 'and but' is incorrect because 'and' and 'but' serve different purposes and should not be used together. Here, 'but' alone is appropriate to introduce a contrast. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity.

× I always give gifts to others in their birthday, but sometimes it can be on holidays such as 8th of March or 7th of May and et cetera.

✓ I always give gifts to others on their birthday, but sometimes it can be on holidays such as the 8th of March or the 7th of May, and so on.

The correct preposition for occasions like birthdays is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'et cetera' is better replaced with 'and so on' in spoken English, and 'the' is needed before dates.

× Or I don't think that I will give them in just simple day because I don't.

✓ Or I don't think that I will give them on just a simple day because I don't.

The preposition 'on' is used for days, not 'in'. Also, 'a' is needed before 'simple day' to indicate a singular countable noun.

× if they will have interest on flowers, I definitely will give them flower.

✓ if they are interested in flowers, I definitely will give them flowers.

The phrase 'have interest on' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'be interested in'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× I definitely will give them flower.

✓ I definitely will give them flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to more than one or a general category.

× We didn't have enough money to buy purchase something for their, for example, birthday or etcetera.

✓ We didn't have enough money to buy or purchase something for them, for example, for their birthday or so on.

The phrase 'buy purchase' is redundant; choose one verb. Also, 'for their' is incomplete; it should be 'for them'. 'Et cetera' is better replaced with 'so on' in spoken English.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This sentence is a question and grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× no one can afford themselves expensive gifts and they can at least do handmade gifts to their partners or etcetera and it really gives really good feelings to them.

✓ no one can afford expensive gifts themselves, and they can at least make handmade gifts for their partners or so on, and it really gives good feelings to them.

The reflexive pronoun 'themselves' should come after the object 'expensive gifts'. Also, 'do handmade gifts' is incorrect; 'make handmade gifts' is correct. 'To their partners' should be 'for their partners'. 'Et cetera' is better replaced with 'so on'. The phrase 'really gives really good feelings' is redundant; one 'really' is sufficient.