礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar answer ta besh boro, kintu kichu redundancy ache. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, ar kichu linking words add korte jate answer ta natural lage.

範例: No, I am not very good at giving gifts because I often get confused about choosing the perfect one. Therefore, I usually ask for help from my mother, friends, or family members.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ar grammar error ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shundor vabe link korte, ar kichu specific example dite paren. Ete answer ta aro natural ar effective hobe.

範例: I usually give gifts during special occasions such as birthday parties and marriage ceremonies. However, my partner often chooses the gifts because I find it difficult to select beautiful presents, especially for official events.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence structure aro clear korte hobe. Apni linking words use kore answer ta aro logical korte paren. Specific example deya bhalo.

範例: I always consider the age of the person when choosing a gift because different ages require different types of presents. For example, since I am not good at selecting gifts for children, I usually choose chocolates for them.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar vocabulary error ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke aro natural ar fluent korte. Linking words use korle answer ta aro bhalo hobe.

範例: I am not good at crafting, so I usually do not give handmade gifts. However, nowadays, you can buy handmade gifts from stores, and I definitely purchase one if I think the person will like it.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar sentence structure problem ache. Apni chesta korun answer ta ke shundor vabe organize korte, ar linking words use korte. Apnar opinion clear, kintu aro bistarito example dile bhalo hoto.

範例: Not really. I believe expensive gifts are often just a way to show off, which I don't like. If your feelings come from the heart, even a small gift can bring happiness to the person receiving it.

× No, I'm not a very good at good giving gifts because I cannot choose the perfect gift for a perfect person.

✓ No, I'm not very good at giving gifts because I cannot choose the perfect gift for a perfect person.

The phrase 'a very good at good giving gifts' is incorrect because 'good' is used redundantly and the article 'a' is unnecessary before 'very good'. The correct form is 'not very good at giving gifts'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I always be confused while choosing gift so I have to take help from Mama and friends and families.

✓ I am always confused while choosing gifts, so I have to take help from Mama and friends and family.

The verb 'be' should be in the correct form 'am' for first person singular. Also, 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to gifts in general. 'Families' is better as 'family' when referring collectively. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Most of the time I give gifts to others when I go to any party like birthday parties, marriage ceremonies like this and always my partner choose the gift because I cannot choose a very beautiful present for the for the officials.

✓ Most of the time, I give gifts to others when I go to parties like birthday parties or marriage ceremonies, and my partner always chooses the gift because I cannot choose a very beautiful present for the officials.

The phrase 'like this' is unclear and unnecessary. 'Marriage ceremonies like this' should be 'marriage ceremonies'. Also, 'choose' should be 'chooses' to agree with the third person singular subject 'partner'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I always considered the age of the person I am gifting to.

✓ I always consider the age of the person I am gifting to.

The verb 'considered' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'consider' is appropriate. This maintains tense consistency.

× This is crucial because it's depending on the age you have to choose different gifts for different persons.

✓ This is crucial because it depends on the age; you have to choose different gifts for different people.

'It's depending' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it depends'. Also, 'persons' is less common than 'people' in this context. The sentence is corrected for proper verb form and word choice.

× Since I am not very good at choosing gift for the child, I always go for chocolates.

✓ Since I am not very good at choosing gifts for children, I always go for chocolates.

'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to gifts in general. 'The child' is better as 'children' to generalize. This improves grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I am very bad at crafting so I usually do not keep someone a handmade gift, but nowadays you can buy handmade gifts from the store and I definitely purchase one if I think that person is interested on it.

✓ I am very bad at crafting, so I usually do not give someone a handmade gift, but nowadays you can buy handmade gifts from the store, and I definitely purchase one if I think that person is interested in it.

'Keep someone a handmade gift' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'give'. Also, the preposition 'interested on' should be 'interested in'. Commas are added for sentence clarity.

× Not really. I think expensive gifts is a show off.

✓ Not really. I think expensive gifts are a show off.

'Gifts' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× So if your feelings is really from the deep of your heart, I think a little gift is very A little gift can buy happiness to the person you are gifting to so.

✓ So if your feelings are really from the depths of your heart, I think a little gift is very meaningful. A little gift can bring happiness to the person you are gifting to.

'Feelings' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. 'From the deep of your heart' is better expressed as 'from the depths of your heart'. The sentence is split for clarity and corrected for grammar and meaning.