礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I really good at send gifts"应为"I am really good at giving gifts"。建议注意动词形式和时态的正确使用，同时回答应更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I am really good at giving gifts because my friends always feel happier when they receive something from me.

建議: 回答中表达不够自然，"For myself"用法不当，且句子结构较为简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。

範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as my friends' birthdays or during festivals.

建議: 回答中有词汇错误，如"test"应为"taste"，且句子结构不完整。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并简洁明了地表达观点。

範例: When choosing a gift, I consider my friends' tastes. For example, if they like electronic products, I might give them a computer or a cellphone.

建議: 回答中缺少助动词和冠词，如"when I 12 years old"应为"when I was 12 years old"，"hand card"应为"handmade card"。建议注意语法和词汇的准确性。

範例: Yes, when I was 12 years old, I made a handmade card for my parents to show my appreciation. They were very happy.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如"my friends really crazy"应为"my friend is really crazy"，且句子结构不完整。建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性。

範例: Yes, I think expensive gifts can better express my feelings. For example, my friend is really crazy about electronic products, so I gave her a computer and she was very happy.

× Yes, I think I really good at send gifts because when I send some gifts to my friends they are always much happier.

✓ Yes, I think I am really good at sending gifts because when I send some gifts to my friends they are always much happier.

句子中缺少动词“am”，且“send”应使用动名词形式“sending”，因为介词“at”后面应接动名词。

× For myself, I usually give gifts at many situations.

✓ For myself, I usually give gifts in many situations.

介词“at”用法错误，表示“在许多情况下”应使用介词“in”。

× For example, when my friends have some birthday I will send them gifts and when they meet some festivals I also send the gifts to them.

✓ For example, when my friends have a birthday I will send them gifts and when they have some festivals I also send gifts to them.

“birthday”应使用单数形式“a birthday”，且“meet some festivals”表达不当，应改为“have some festivals”。

× Firstly, I think I should consider their test.

✓ Firstly, I think I should consider their taste.

“test”用词错误，应为“taste”（喜好）。

× For example, if my friends loved the electronic products, I will send them some computer or cell phones to them.

✓ For example, if my friends love electronic products, I will send them some computers or cell phones.

“electronic products”前不需要定冠词“the”，且“computer”应使用复数“computers”，去掉重复的“to them”。

× Yes, when I 12 years old I made a hand card for my parents to show my appreciation.

✓ Yes, when I was 12 years old I made a hand card for my parents to show my appreciation.

缺少过去时态助动词“was”，表示过去的状态。

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I think it can show my value.

✓ Yes, I think it can show my feelings.

“value”用词不当，应为“feelings”（感情）。

× For example my friends really crazy about electronic products and I send her a computer, she is very happy.

✓ For example, my friend is really crazy about electronic products and I sent her a computer; she was very happy.

“friends”应为单数“friend”，动词时态应与上下文一致，且“send”应为过去式“sent”，代词“she”前应加分号或句号。